Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-06.txt

"Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Fri, 12 October 2012 22:54 UTC

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From: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
To: "Tom Kristensen (tomkrist)" <tomkrist@cisco.com>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
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Hi Tom,

Thanks for the quick turnaround on this. I have reviewed the updated draft and validated that all of my comments were addressed, except for this very minor nit:

5) Section 6.2,
r/Entities MUST only have at most one/Entities MUST have at most one

I am okay not addressing this; however, if you need to make changes for any other reason, it would be good to address this one as well.

Cheers,
Charles

> -----Original Message-----
> From: bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org] On
> Behalf Of Tom Kristensen (tomkrist)
> Sent: Friday, October 12, 2012 5:00 AM
> To: bfcpbis@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-06.txt
> 
> On 10/12/2012 01:54 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >   This draft is a work item of the Binary Floor Control Protocol Bis  Working
> Group of the IETF.
> >
> > 	Title           : The Binary Floor Control Protocol (BFCP)
> > 	Author(s)       : Gonzalo Camarillo
> >                            Keith Drage
> >                            Tom Kristensen
> >                            Joerg Ott
> >                            Charles Eckel
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-06.txt
> > 	Pages           : 87
> > 	Date            : 2012-10-12
> >
> 
> Updated after receiving WGLC review comments from Mary Barnes, Charles
> Eckel and Ernst Horvath, according to discussion and description on the
> BFCPbis WG mailing list.
> 
> In addition, and after checking out with the original authors of RFC
> 4582, the ipr parameter is changed s/pre5378Trust200902/trust200902/.
> 
> Cf. <URL:
> http://tools.ietf.org//rfcdiff?url1=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-
> rfc4582bis-05.txt&url2=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4582bis-
> 06.txt
>  >
> 
> -- Tom
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