Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06
"Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com> Mon, 02 May 2016 11:29 UTC
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From: "Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06
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Hi Paul, Thanks for your feedback. Please see inline. Also attached are the diffs -----Original Message----- From: bfcpbis <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Date: Wednesday, 16 March 2016 at 2:08 AM To: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >Generally in good shape. A couple of comments: > >* Section 4.1: > >I see you are using "bfcp" for the subprotocol name. >IMO it would be better to use "BFCP" for consistency with what is used >in the m-line proto field. Agree. Will change to "BFCP" > >(I've been querying for information about case-sensitivity of the >sub-protocol field. I have not gotten a definitive answer, but the >prudent path is to assume it is case-sensitive.) > >* Section 7.1 says: > > An endpoint (i.e., both the offerer and the answerer) MUST create an > SDP media description ("m=" line) for each BFCP-over-WebSocket media > stream and MUST assign a TCP/WSS/BFCP value to the "proto" field of > the "m=" line. Furthermore, the SDP answerer (Server) MUST add an > "a=ws-uri" or "a=wss-uri" attribute in the "m=" line of each BFCP- > over-WebSocket media stream depending on whether it is WS or WSS. > >This says to use TCP/WSS/BFCP even when using "a=ws-uri". I presume that >is wrong. An endpoint (i.e., both the offerer and the answerer) MUST create an SDP media description ("m=" line) for each BFCP-over-WebSocket media stream and MUST assign either TCP/WSS/BFCP or TCP/WS/BFCP value to The "proto" field of the "m=" line depending on whether the endpoint wishes to use secure WebSocket or WebSocket. Furthermore, the server side, which could be either the offerer or answerer, MUST add an "a=ws-uri" or "a=wss-uri" attribute in the media section depending on whether it wishes to use WebSocket or secure WebSocket. > >Also, see my comment on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-01 >(http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/bfcpbis/_y_FxCOw5pI_YeRQXGvMLpKGZY0) > >regarding the case where the offer is generated by the server. They >apply here equally. The text needs some reworking to address that case. Agree. I will add following para at the end of section 7.2 NEW: It is possible that a endpoint (e.g., a browser) sends an offerless INVITE to the server. In such cases the server will act as SDP offerer. The server MUST assign the SDP "setup" attribute with a value of "passive. The server MUST have an "a=ws-uri" or "a=wss-uri² attribute in the media section depending on whether the application uses WebSocket or secure WebSocket. This attribute MUST follow the syntax defined in Section 3. For BFCP application, the "proto" value in the "m=" line MUST be TCP/WSS/BFCP if WebSocket is over TLS, else it MUST be TCP/WS/BFCP. Regards, Ram > > Thanks, > Paul > > >On 3/13/16 12:55 PM, Charles Eckel (eckelcu) wrote: >> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websocket-06 >> >> Please review and provide any comments by Monday, March 28, 2016. >> Comments should be sent to the authors and the BFCPBIS WG list. >> If you review the draft but do not have any comments, please send a note >> to that effect as well. >> >> Thanks, >> Charles >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> bfcpbis mailing list >> bfcpbis@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bfcpbis >> > >_______________________________________________ >bfcpbis mailing list >bfcpbis@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bfcpbis
- [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-websock… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Charles Eckel (eckelcu)
- Re: [bfcpbis] WGLC on draft-ietf-bfcpbis-bfcp-web… Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)