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Re: [Bgp-autoconf] Revoicing DT document for -00

Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 07 March 2021 17:34 UTC

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From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Bgp-autoconf] Revoicing DT document for -00
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Jeff,

Looks good to me!

Regards,
Jeff
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Bgp-autoconf [mailto:bgp-autoconf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>> Jeffrey Haas
>> Sent: Sunday, March 7, 2021 4:41 AM
>> To: bgp-autoconf@ietf.org
>> Subject: [Bgp-autoconf] Revoicing DT document for -00
>> 
>> I've completed the revoicing work I had discussed in the last two sessions.
>> For review:
>> - The master branch copy here contains all changes from the design team to
>>  date. [1]
>> - The jhaas voice branch contains the document post changes. [2]
>> 
>> 
>> For convenience, I've attached the rfcdiff so the changes are more obvious.
>> 
>> The intent of the revoicing is to make the state requirements show up very
>> clearly at the beginning of the text and then to expand on them.  The second
>> change is to get the protocol comparisons out of the main text and into the
>> appendix.
>> 
>> -- Jeff
>> 
>> [1]
>> https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations/blob
>> /master/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations.txt
>> 
>> [2]
>> https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations/blob
>> /jhaas/draft-00-revoice/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations.txt
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