[Bier] Re: Call for review for draft-ietf-bier-bfd

[Reshad Rahman <[e-mail]>]

 Hi,
Here are my comments:
- Section 1, 2nd paragraph, states that RFC8562 defines a method for BFD to detect unicast failures between the sender and receivers in multipoint or multicast networks. Should that just say "detect failures" (remove unicast) instead?- Section 4, last paragraph. It says "this discriminator", should that be "My Discriminator"?- Section 4.1, last paragraph. Typo "the My Discriminator field n the" -> "the My Discriminator field in the"- Section 5.6 of RFC8562 on Session Establishment mentions that "Sessions on the tail MAY be established dynamically, based on the receipt of a multipoint BFD Control packet from the head". In this document it seems to be implied that sessions on the BFERs (tail nodes) are established via the bootstrapping mechanism. Whether true or not, this should be explicitly stated one way or the other.- Section 6.1, any concerns that the BFIR could be overwhelmed by a spike of incoming BFD control packets? I see this is not mentioned in RFC8563.
Finally, shouldn't LSR WG also take a look at this doc (even though Les has already provided comments)?
Regards,Reshad.
    On Sunday, July 7, 2024 at 08:32:38 PM EDT, <[e-mail]> wrote:  
 
 
Hi Reshad, 

No problem for the extension. 

Thank you very much!


Best regards,

Sandy





OriginalFrom: ReshadRahman <[e-mail]>To: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;张征00007940;Date: 2024年07月08日 03:56Subject: Re: Call for review for draft-ietf-bier-bfdHi,
Thanks Sandy for forwarding the document to the BFD WG.
I was planning to review this document but work and a work-trip got in the way. Could we please get a 1-week extension?
BFD WG, please review this document.
Regards,Reshad.

On Tuesday, June 25, 2024 at 03:26:28 AM EDT, <[e-mail]> wrote:


Hi, 

The draft-ietf-bier-bfd passed last call in BIER WG. 

We'd like to get more review in BFD WG: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-bfd/ 

Comments and suggestion welcomed, please send your comments before 9th, July. 




And please volunteer if you want to be the shepherd of this draft. 

Thank you!

Best regards,

Sandy