[Bier] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 19 April 2022 06:12 UTC

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Subject: [Bier] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document. Reading IPA in a BAR for a BIER
document made me smile even at 8 AM ;-) Anyway, the document is easy to read
with crystal clear specification.

Please find below one non-blocking COMMENT points and one nit.

Special thanks to:

- Greg Mirsky for the shepherd's write-up including the WG consensus and the
intended status. - Suresh Krishnan for his INT directorate review at
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/KXUlJRKxuG_S2O3YSNJLg_ZwABc/ 
(please ensure that Suresh's comment is acted upon)

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

## Section 1
Suggest to expand "SPF" even if it appears in
https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt

# NITS

## Section 4

Suggest to be consistent in the use of "IPA" and "IGP Algorithm"

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