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charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Les, Thank you very much for your further comments. My responses are inline below with [HC4]. Best Regards, Huaimo ________________________________ From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) Sent: Tuesday, August 9, 2022 12:57 AM To: Huaimo Chen ; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; bier@ietf.org Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt Huaimo =96 Thanx for the quick response. Please see inline. From: Huaimo Chen Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 7:26 PM To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <= ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt Hi Les, Thank you very much for your valuable comments and suggestions. My responses are inline below with [HC3]. Best Regards, Huaimo ________________________________ From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 1:02 PM To: Huaimo Chen >; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) >; bier@ietf.org= > Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt Huaimo =96 In order to support a variable length bit field, you will need to change th= e format of the sub-TLV. So, while you may not need to support more larger = scale today, you do not want to standardize a format that will have to be c= hanged. I think you need to revise the format now. And if you are advertising a bit= string, this could become quite large. RFC 8296 defines support for up to = 4K bits =96 which would require 512 bytes =96 not feasible in IS-IS in a 25= 5 byte TLV. I suggest you advertise this as a 0-based bit number. This means that a 16 = bit field (2 octets) is sufficient to cover Bits 0-65535. [HC3]: The BitPosition field of 16 bits (2 octets) is to store a Bit Positi= on (or Bit Number) assigned to a link. The maximum Bit Position (or Bit Num= ber) is the maximum number of links in a network if one Bit Position is ass= igned to two ends of a link. For a very large network, its total number of = links may be greater than 65535. The BitPosition field of 3 octets in maxim= um is enough. [LES:] OK. But I don=92t understand how you are going to manage assignment = of unique values network-wide. Could you explain? [HC4]: This needs network-wide planning first before configuring bit positi= ons. I thought this number was scoped by the node =96 just had to be unique for = the set of links associated with a single node =96 In which case 64K seems = more than adequate. ?? [HC4]: From BIER-TE architecture, it seems the bit positions are globally u= nique within a network. I also question why you need to include the DisEndBitPosition. For this to = be correct, it needs to match the value locally assigned on the DIS =96 whi= ch means it is safer to retrieve the value from the corresponding advertise= ment by the DIS itself. Otherwise, the non-DIS nodes would have to update their advertisements when= ever they see a change in what is advertised by the DIS. This is not desira= ble. [HC3]: I will remove this field accordingly. [LES:] Thanx =96 glad we are in agreement. So the sub-TLV format becomes: Type: 1 octet Length: 1 octet sub-domain-id: 1 octet BAR: 1 octet IPA: 1 octet BitNumber : 2-octets Specifies the local bit position (0 based) assigned t= o this link/neighbor [HC3]: BitNumber field is extended as follows: the first bit (from left to right) is used as a flag named E flag. When E = =3D 0, the BitNumber field is 2 octets (i.e., 16 bits), the last 15 bits st= ores a Bit Position. When E =3D 1, the BitNumber field is 3 octets (i.e., 2= 4 bits), the last 23 bits stores a Bit Position. [LES:] If we really need variable length, I suggest adding 1 octet =93lengt= h of bitnumber=94 prior to the BitNumber field itself. [HC4]: Toerless says that BIER-TE only supports 64k bit positions. In this = case, 2 octets is enough. Les Les From: BIER > On Behalf = Of Huaimo Chen Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 8:04 AM To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) >= ; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) >; bier@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt Hi Les, Thanks much for your question. My answer is inline below with [HC2]. Best Regards, Huaimo ________________________________ From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > Sent: Wednesday, August 3, 2022 9:58 AM To: Huaimo Chen >; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) >; bier@ietf.org= > Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt Huaimo - Thanx for addressing my comments so quickly. Changes look fine - but I do have one question. You eliminated the text: > "Note that if each of BitPosition > and DrEndBitPosition uses more than 2 octets, we use 4 or more octets > for each of them." Does this mean you have no need to ever support more than 16 bits in these = fields?? [HC2]: It should be ok for now. For scalability, there is a need for suppor= ting more than 16 bits in these fields. Les > -----Original Message----- > From: BIER > On Behal= f Of Huaimo Chen > Sent: Tuesday, August 2, 2022 7:59 PM > To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) >; > bier@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt > > Hi Les, > > Thank you very much for your valuable comments. > I have addressed them in the updated draft (uploaded). > My responses are also inline below with [HC]. > > Best Regards, > Huaimo > -----Original Message----- > From: BIER > On Behal= f Of Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > Sent: Friday, July 29, 2022 4:59 PM > To: bier@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt > > Some pedantic comments on this draft: > > For the new BIER-TE sub-TLV: > > 1)The relevant registry has been renamed to be "IS-IS Sub-TLVs for TLVs > Advertising Neighbor Information". Please use this new name. > https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fww > w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fisis-tlv-codepoints%2Fisis-tlv- > codepoints.xhtml%23isis-tlv-codepoints-advertising-neighbor- > information&data=3D05%7C01%7Chuaimo.chen%40futurewei.com%7C5b > bd38c256024261ea5608da71a546c0%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc% > 7C1%7C0%7C637947251926210034%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoi > MC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C300 > 0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=3DybC6zOJkG1sRe%2FQosV23MElysXHkg7jnHS70N > %2Bf7bpE%3D&reserved=3D0 > [HC]: I have renamed it as you suggested. > > 2)Please do NOT insert padding to keep content aligned on a 4 byte > boundary. This may be useful for OSPF, but it is not for IS-IS as TLVs ar= e NOT > aligned inside an LSP. All you are doing is wasting space - which is prec= ious in > IS-IS given the limited LSP space. > [HC]: Removed padding. > > 3)You say in Section 2: > > "Note that if each of BitPosition > and DrEndBitPosition uses more than 2 octets, we use 4 or more octets > for each of them." > > I do not see how the receiver of the sub-TLV could tell whether the 2 oct= et or > 4 octet encoding was sent as you have nothing that specifies the length o= f > these fields. > You can't use the total length of the sub-TLV as it could include optiona= l sub- > sub-TLVs. > > ?? > [HC]: Deleted the quoted text. > > 4)In IANA section, I do not know why you specified "N" for TLVs 23 and 22= 3. > While RFC 5311 (which defines these TLVs) is not popular, if there was an > implementation, I see no reason why it should be invalid to send the BIER= -TE > info in these TLVs. > [HC]: Changed "n" to "y" for TLVs 23 and 223. > > Thanx. > > Les > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: BIER > On Beh= alf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org > > Sent: Friday, July 29, 2022 12:13 PM > > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org > > Cc: bier@ietf.org > > Subject: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Bit Indexed Explicit Replication WG of= the > IETF. > > > > Title : IS-IS Extensions for BIER-TE > > Authors : Huaimo Chen > > Mike McBride > > Aijun Wang > > Gyan S. 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Hi Les,

    Thank you very much for your further comments.
    My responses are inline below with [HC4].

Best Regards,
Huaimo
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsber= g) <ginsberg@cisco.com>
Sent: Tuesday, August 9, 2022 12:57 AM
To: Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@futurewei.com>; Les Ginsberg (gin= sberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org <bie= r@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt
 

Huaimo =96

 

Thanx for the quick response.

Please see inline.

 

From: Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@futurewei.com>
Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 7:26 PM
To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com>; Les Ginsberg= (ginsberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt

 

Hi Les,

 

    Thank you very = much for your valuable comments and suggestions.

    My responses ar= e inline below with [HC3].

 

Best Regards,

Huaimo

From:= Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com>
Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 1:02 PM
To: Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@futurewei.com>; Les Ginsberg (g= insberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org<= /a> <bier@i= etf.org>
Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt

 

Huaimo =96

 

In order to support a variable length bit field, you will need to change th= e format of the sub-TLV. So, while you may not need to support more larger = scale today, you do not want to standardize a format that will have to be c= hanged.

I think you need to revise the format now. And if you are advertising a bit= string, this could become quite large. RFC 8296 defines support for up to = 4K bits =96 which would require 512 bytes =96 not feasible in IS-IS in a 25= 5 byte TLV.

I suggest you advertise this as a 0-based bit number. This means that a 16 = bit field (2 octets) is sufficient to cover Bits 0-65535.

[HC3]: The BitPosition field of 16 bits (2 octets) is to store a Bit P= osition (or Bit Number) assigned to a link. The maximum Bit Position (or Bi= t Number) is the maximum number of links in a network if one Bit Position i= s assigned to two ends of a link. For a very large network, its total number of links may be greater than 65535.= The BitPosition field of 3 octets in maximum is enough. 

[LES:] OK. But I don=92t understand how you are going to manage assig= nment of unique values network-wide. Could you explain?

[HC4]: This needs network-wide planning first before configuring bit = positions.   

I thought this number was scoped by the node =96 just had to be uniqu= e for the set of links associated with a single node =96 In which case 64K = seems more than adequate.

??

[HC4]: From BIER-TE architecture, it seems the bit positions are glob= ally unique within a network.


I also question why you need to include the DisEndBitPosition. For this to = be correct, it needs to match the value locally assigned on the DIS =96 whi= ch means it is safer to retrieve the value from the corresponding advertise= ment by the DIS itself.

Otherwise, the non-DIS nodes would have to update their advertisements when= ever they see a change in what is advertised by the DIS. This is not desira= ble.

[HC3]: I will remove this field accordingly.

 

[LES:] Thanx =96 glad we are in agreement.

 

So the sub-TLV format becomes:

 

Type:  1 octet

Length:  1 octet

sub-domain-id:  1 octet

BAR:  1 octet

IPA:  1 octet

BitNumber :  2-octets Specifies the local bit position (0 based) assig= ned to this link/neighbor

[HC3]: BitNumber field is extended as follows: 

the first bit (from left to right) is used as a flag named E flag. When E = =3D 0, the BitNumber field is 2 octets (i.e., 16 bits), the last 15 bits st= ores a Bit Position. When E =3D 1, the BitNumber field is 3 octets (i.e., 24 bits), the last 23 bits stores a Bit Position. 

 

[LES:] If we really need variable length, I suggest adding 1 octet = =93length of bitnumber=94 prior to the BitNumber field itself.

[HC4]: Toerless says that BIER-TE only supports 64k bit positions. In= this case, 2 octets is enough.

 

  Les

 

 

 

   Les

 

From: BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Huaimo Chen
Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 8:04 AM
To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com>; Les Ginsberg (gin= sberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org<= /a>
Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt

 

Hi Les,

 

    Thanks much for= your question.

    My answer is in= line below with [HC2].

 

Best Regards,

Huaimo

From:= Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com>
Sent: Wednesday, August 3, 2022 9:58 AM
To: Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@futurewei.com>; Les Ginsberg (g= insberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; bier@ietf.org<= /a> <bier@i= etf.org>
Subject: RE: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt

 

Huaimo -

Thanx for addressing my comments so quickly.

Changes look fine - but I do have one question.

You eliminated the text:

> "Note that if each of BitPosition
>    and DrEndBitPosition uses more than 2 octets, we use= 4 or more octets
>    for each of them."

Does this mean you have no need to ever support more than 16 bits in these = fields??

[HC2]: It should be ok for now. For scalability, there is a need for suppor= ting more than 16 bits in these fields.

   Les

> -----Original Message-----
> From: BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Huaimo Chen
> Sent: Tuesday, August 2, 2022 7:59 PM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg=3D40cisco.com@dmarc= .ietf.org>;
> bier@ietf= .org
> Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt
>
> Hi Les,
>
>     Thank you very much for your valuable comments= .
>     I have addressed them in the updated draft (up= loaded).
>     My responses are also inline below with [HC].<= br> >
> Best Regards,
> Huaimo
> -----Original Message-----
> From: BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Les Ginsberg (gins= berg)
> Sent: Friday, July 29, 2022 4:59 PM
> To: bier@= ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt
>
> Some pedantic comments on this draft:
>
> For the new BIER-TE sub-TLV:
>
> 1)The relevant registry has been renamed to be "IS-IS Sub-TLVs fo= r TLVs
> Advertising Neighbor Information". Please use this new name.
> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fww<= br> > w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fisis-tlv-codepoints%2Fisis-tlv-
> codepoints.xhtml%23isis-tlv-codepoints-advertising-neighbor-
> information&amp;data=3D05%7C01%7Chuaimo.chen%40futurewei.com%7C5b<= br> > bd38c256024261ea5608da71a546c0%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%
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> [HC]: I have renamed it as you suggested.
>
> 2)Please do NOT insert padding to keep content aligned on a 4 byte
> boundary. This may be useful for OSPF, but it is not for IS-IS as TLVs= are NOT
> aligned inside an LSP. All you are doing is wasting space - which is p= recious in
> IS-IS given the limited LSP space.
> [HC]: Removed padding.
>
> 3)You say in Section 2:
>
> "Note that if each of BitPosition
>    and DrEndBitPosition uses more than 2 octets, we use= 4 or more octets
>    for each of them."
>
> I do not see how the receiver of the sub-TLV could tell whether the 2 = octet or
> 4 octet encoding was sent as you have nothing that specifies the lengt= h of
> these fields.
> You can't use the total length of the sub-TLV as it could include opti= onal sub-
> sub-TLVs.
>
> ??
> [HC]: Deleted the quoted text.
>
> 4)In IANA section, I do not know why you specified "N" for T= LVs 23 and 223.
> While RFC 5311 (which defines these TLVs) is not popular, if there was= an
> implementation, I see no reason why it should be invalid to send the B= IER-TE
> info in these TLVs.
> [HC]: Changed "n" to "y" for TLVs 23 and 223.
>
> Thanx.
>
>     Les
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of int= ernet-drafts@ietf.org
> > Sent: Friday, July 29, 2022 12:13 PM
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> > Subject: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Draft= s
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Bit Indexed Explicit Replication= WG of the
> IETF.
> >
> >         Title  =          : IS-IS Extensions for BIE= R-TE
> >         Authors &nbs= p;       : Huaimo Chen
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Mike McBride
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Aijun Wang
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Gyan S. Mishra
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Yanhe Fan
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Lei Liu
> >           =             &nb= sp;   Xufeng Liu
> >   Filename        : = draft-ietf-bier-te-isis-01.txt
> >   Pages        =    : 7
> >   Date        &= nbsp;   : 2022-07-29
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document describes IS-IS extensions for di= stributing
> >    BitPositions configured on the links in "B= it Index Explicit
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> >
> >
> >
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