[Bier] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 25 August 2021 01:02 UTC

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Subject: [Bier] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: No Objection

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[S2.1, comment]

* "A packet from BFR1 to BFR3,BFR4 and from BFR4 to BFR uses (p1,p2,p3,p4,p6)"

  ->

  "A packet from BFR1 to BFR3,BFR4 and from BFR4 to BFR6 uses (p1,p2,p3,p4,p6)"

  ...I think.

[S4.2.2,4.3 comment]

* Both of these forward_routed() encap sections have no apparent mention
  of MTU considerations.  Maybe just drop a handy reference in one of these
  sections to the text in RFC 8296 section 3?