[Bier] Re: Call for review for draft-ietf-bier-bfd

[Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>]

Hi Reshad,
thank you for your thorough review and thoughtful comments. I'll work on
addressing your concerns and share proposed updates for the discussion.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jul 16, 2024 at 7:29 PM Reshad Rahman <reshad=
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Here are my comments:
>
> - Section 1, 2nd paragraph, states that RFC8562 defines a method for BFD
> to detect unicast failures between the sender and receivers in multipoint
> or multicast networks. Should that just say "detect failures" (remove
> unicast) instead?
> - Section 4, last paragraph. It says "this discriminator", should that be
> "My Discriminator"?
> - Section 4.1, last paragraph. Typo "the My Discriminator field n the" ->
> "the My Discriminator field in the"
> - Section 5.6 of RFC8562 on Session Establishment mentions that "Sessions
> on the tail MAY be established dynamically, based on the receipt of a
> multipoint BFD Control packet from the head". In this document it seems
> to be implied that sessions on the BFERs (tail nodes) are established via
> the bootstrapping mechanism. Whether true or not, this should be explicitly
> stated one way or the other.
> - Section 6.1, any concerns that the BFIR could be overwhelmed by a spike
> of incoming BFD control packets? I see this is not mentioned in RFC8563.
>
> Finally, shouldn't LSR WG also take a look at this doc (even though Les
> has already provided comments)?
>
> Regards,
> Reshad.
>
> On Sunday, July 7, 2024 at 08:32:38 PM EDT, <[e-mail]>
> wrote:
>
>
> Hi Reshad,
>
> No problem for the extension.
>
> Thank you very much!
>
> Best regards,
>
> Sandy
>
>
> <http://www.zte.com.cn/>
> Original
> *From: *ReshadRahman <[e-mail]>
> *To: *[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;
> 张征00007940;
> *Date: *2024年07月08日 03:56
> *Subject: **Re: Call for review for draft-ietf-bier-bfd*
> Hi,
>
> Thanks Sandy for forwarding the document to the BFD WG.
>
> I was planning to review this document but work and a work-trip got in the
> way. Could we please get a 1-week extension?
>
> BFD WG, please review this document.
>
> Regards,
> Reshad.
>
>
> On Tuesday, June 25, 2024 at 03:26:28 AM EDT, <[e-mail]>
> wrote:
>
>
> Hi,
>
> The draft-ietf-bier-bfd passed last call in BIER WG.
>
> We'd like to get more review in BFD WG:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-bfd/
>
> Comments and suggestion welcomed, please send your comments before 9th,
> July.
>
>
> And please volunteer if you want to be the shepherd of this draft.
>
> Thank you!
>
> Best regards,
>
> Sandy
>
>
>
>
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