Re: [Bier] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10
"Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang" <zzhang@juniper.net> Tue, 21 November 2023 14:38 UTC
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From: "Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang" <zzhang@juniper.net>
To: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>, "int-dir@ietf.org" <int-dir@ietf.org>
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Hi Haoyu, Thanks for your review and comments. I changed "the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to" to "the set of BFERs (egress PEs)" - hopefully that is clear. It'll be posted after I make more changes based on other reviews. Thanks. Jeffrey Juniper Business Use Only -----Original Message----- From: Haoyu Song via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sent: Monday, November 20, 2023 7:33 PM To: int-dir@ietf.org Cc: bier@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bier-evpn.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org Subject: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10 [External Email. Be cautious of content] Reviewer: Haoyu Song Review result: Ready I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments just like any other last call comments. I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication. I’m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes … For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes …"
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