[Bier] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Bier] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: (with COMMENT)
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draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10: No Objection

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Hi,

thank you for this work.

Does the text on Segment Routing equally apply to SR-MPLS and SRv6?
Wouldn't an Informative reference to 8402 be useful?

Couple nits most surely already found:
Expand BIFT and BFR on first use (introduction).
s/designed so that is/designed so that its/.