[BLISS] Gonzalo Camarillo's comments on call-completion draft

"WORLEY, Dale R (Dale)" <dworley@avaya.com> Sun, 11 July 2010 17:50 UTC

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Gonzalo made some comments on the -05 draft.  The comments are in

http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/bliss/current/msg01078.html

and Martin's responses are in:

http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/bliss/current/msg01092.html

I think the comment "Abstracts should not contain references." has not been implemented in -06.  I think this is a matter of changing the references to RFCs 4235 and 5359 to just naming them, and (probably more importantly) giving their titles or descriptions.  Here is a proposal:

   For the realization of a basic solution without queueing call-
   completion requests, this document references the usage of the the
   dialog event package (defined in RFC 4235) as described as
   'automatic redial' in (RFC 5359, SIP Service Examples).

Dale