[bmwg] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: (with COMMENT)

Spencer Dawkins <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 16 April 2018 16:14 UTC

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Subject: [bmwg] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: (with COMMENT)

Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: No Objection

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A nit:

  The terms defined in this section are extensions to the terms
   defined in [RFC7426] "Software-Defined Networking (SDN): Layers and
   Architecture Terminology". This RFC should be referred before
   attempting to make use of this document.

When this draft is published, "this RFC" won't be as clear as it is now (the
phrase would also apply to the current document, which would be an RFC).
Perhaps "That RFC", or even "RFC 7426" would be clearer.

There are a lot of measures that say

Measurement Units:
   N/A

You might mean "not milliseconds, or some measure like that", but I found it
confusing that something like "Trial Repetition" doesn't have measurement
units. Saying something like "Number of trials", or even "Integer" would be
clearer to me.

[bmwg] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-iet… Spencer Dawkins
Re: [bmwg] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Sarah B