[bmwg] Comments on draft-dcn-bmwg-containerized-infra-03
"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com> Wed, 20 November 2019 03:54 UTC
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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com>
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Subject: [bmwg] Comments on draft-dcn-bmwg-containerized-infra-03
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Hi Authors,
I have a few comments to share on your draft:
draft-dcn-bmwg-containerized-infra-03
regards,
Al
(as a participant)
Figure 3: Examples of User Space Network Model - Device Pass-through
o User space network model / vSwitch model: ovs-dpdk[ovs-dpdk],
vpp[vpp], netmap[netmap]
I'm glad to see these references for some of the in-frequently used
terms in IETF.
There are some more terms that *may* need references, such as
virtio-user in Figure 4
| +-----------------|--------------------|-----------------+ |
| | vSwitch | | | |
| | +-------v-----+ +-----v-------+ | |
| | | virtio-user | | virtio-user | | |
| | +-------^-----+ +-----^-------+ | |
Consider adding definitions/references for new terms in Figures 5, 6, and 7.
Also, new terms in the text with similar specialization.
This will help when the draft goes to IESG eventually.
Test set-ups:
Consider referencing the Network Service draft for additional setups.
6. Security Considerations
TBD
BMWG has a standard paragraph for this, that you can modify as necessary.
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