[bmwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08
Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Mon, 16 April 2018 12:41 UTC
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Subject: [bmwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2018-04-16 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-02 IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19 Summary: This is a well written comprehensive test set for SDN controllers. Two minor points remain from my previous review that I would draft to the attention of the responsible AD. Major issues: None Minor issues: I found the large amount of text on Openflow that appears out of the blue in the appendix somewhat strange since the test suit is controller protocol agnostic. I understand that this is included by way of illustrative example. It might be useful to the reader to make a statement to this effect. Nits/editorial comments: The test traffic generators TP1 and TP2 SHOULD be connected to the first and the last leaf Network Device. SB> I am sure I know what does first and last mean, but the meaning should be called out.
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