Re: [bmwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-tran-tech-benchmarking-03

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com> Thu, 01 December 2016 21:57 UTC

Return-Path: <acmorton@att.com>
X-Original-To: bmwg@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: bmwg@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6D5E112954A for <bmwg@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 13:57:05 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.601
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.601 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id tDoHK0JqPGA9 for <bmwg@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 13:57:03 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mx0a-00191d01.pphosted.com (mx0a-00191d01.pphosted.com [67.231.149.140]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E894E129548 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 13:56:59 -0800 (PST)
Received: from pps.filterd (m0049295.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by m0049295.ppops.net-00191d01. (8.16.0.17/8.16.0.17) with SMTP id uB1LtLZN032816 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 16:56:59 -0500
Received: from alpi155.enaf.aldc.att.com (sbcsmtp7.sbc.com [144.160.229.24]) by m0049295.ppops.net-00191d01. with ESMTP id 272v5k88d5-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT) for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 16:56:58 -0500
Received: from enaf.aldc.att.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by alpi155.enaf.aldc.att.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id uB1Luvv6009374 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 16:56:57 -0500
Received: from mlpi409.sfdc.sbc.com (mlpi409.sfdc.sbc.com [130.9.128.241]) by alpi155.enaf.aldc.att.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id uB1LuqXC009328 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 16:56:52 -0500
Received: from clpi183.sldc.sbc.com (clpi183.sldc.sbc.com [135.41.1.46]) by mlpi409.sfdc.sbc.com (RSA Interceptor) for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 21:56:44 GMT
Received: from sldc.sbc.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by clpi183.sldc.sbc.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id uB1Luh66016311 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 15:56:44 -0600
Received: from mail-blue.research.att.com (mail-blue.research.att.com [135.207.178.11]) by clpi183.sldc.sbc.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id uB1Lue7l016124 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 15:56:40 -0600
Received: from exchange.research.att.com (njmtcas2.research.att.com [135.207.255.47]) by mail-blue.research.att.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id F3979F04C3 for <bmwg@ietf.org>; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 16:56:39 -0500 (EST)
Received: from njmtexg5.research.att.com ([fe80::b09c:ff13:4487:78b6]) by njmtcas2.research.att.com ([fe80::d550:ec84:f872:cad9%15]) with mapi id 14.03.0319.002; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 16:56:39 -0500
From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: "bmwg@ietf.org" <bmwg@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: WGLC: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-tran-tech-benchmarking-03
Thread-Index: AdJMHKeI8pXogywmQPWi3TDrmEMIjgAAO97Q
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 21:56:38 +0000
Message-ID: <4D7F4AD313D3FC43A053B309F97543CF661099@njmtexg5.research.att.com>
References: <4D7F4AD313D3FC43A053B309F97543CF661081@njmtexg5.research.att.com>
In-Reply-To: <4D7F4AD313D3FC43A053B309F97543CF661081@njmtexg5.research.att.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [130.10.194.221]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-RSA-Inspected: yes
X-RSA-Classifications: public
X-Proofpoint-Virus-Version: vendor=fsecure engine=2.50.10432:, , definitions=2016-12-01_19:, , signatures=0
X-Proofpoint-Spam-Details: rule=outbound_policy_notspam policy=outbound_policy score=0 priorityscore=1501 malwarescore=0 suspectscore=0 phishscore=0 bulkscore=0 spamscore=0 clxscore=1015 lowpriorityscore=0 impostorscore=0 adultscore=0 classifier=spam adjust=0 reason=mlx scancount=1 engine=8.0.1-1609300000 definitions=main-1612010355
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/bmwg/ZsRL9Rozb-TxmGhJWC-TrQy8xsY>
Subject: Re: [bmwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-tran-tech-benchmarking-03
X-BeenThere: bmwg@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17
Precedence: list
List-Id: Benchmarking Methodology Working Group <bmwg.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/bmwg>, <mailto:bmwg-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/bmwg/>
List-Post: <mailto:bmwg@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:bmwg-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bmwg>, <mailto:bmwg-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 01 Dec 2016 21:57:05 -0000

HI Marius and Co-authors,

I found a few small errors in the latest draft:

Section 7.3.2., paragraph 8:
OLD:

           Dmax - the maximum IPDVin the stream

NEW:

 |         Dmax - the maximum IPDV in the stream


Section 7.7., paragraph 1:
OLD:

    Use Section 26.6 of [RFC2544] unmodified.

NEW:

 |  Use Section 4 of [RFC6201] unmodified.

and please ad the reference to 6201.

thanks,
Al
(as a participant)

> -----Original Message-----
> From: bmwg [mailto:bmwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of MORTON, ALFRED C
> (AL)
> Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 4:50 PM
> To: bmwg@ietf.org
> Subject: [bmwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-tran-tech-benchmarking-03
> 
> *** Security Advisory: This Message Originated Outside of AT&T ***.
> Reference http://cso.att.com/EmailSecurity/IDSP.html for more
> information.
> 
> BMWG:
> 
> A WG Last Call period for the Internet-Draft on
> Benchmarking Methodology for IPv6 Transition Technologies:
> 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-tran-tech-benchmarking-
> 03
> 
> will be open from 1 through 24 December 2016.
> 
> This is the second WGLC on this draft, following the BMWG Last Call
> Process.
> See
> http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/bmwg/current/msg00846.html
> 
> Please read the draft and express your opinion on whether or not it
> should be forwarded to the Area Directors for publication as an
> Informational RFCs.  Send your comments to this list or to the
> co-chairs: acmorton@att.com and sbanks@encrypted.net
> 
> for the co-chairs,
> Al
> 
> _______________________________________________
> bmwg mailing list
> bmwg@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bmwg