Re: [bmwg] WG Last Call: OSPF Control plane convergence

Folks,

I have reviewed these drafts and recommend they be forwarded to the AD for 
review.  Good work!  There are 4 small changes I recommend be made prior to 
submittal as listed below:

1. In the page headings of all three documents it is stated "Manral, et. 
all".  This should be "Manral, et al".  A small nit, but an RFC should have 
this correct.

2.  The Terminology draft introduces new terms "Internal Measurement" for 
White-Box measurements and "External Measurement" for Black-Box 
measurements.  The Methodology draft actually refers to the terms 
"White-Box" and "Black-Box".  Can we just remove the terms "Internal 
Measurement"  and "External Measurement" from the Terminology draft?

3.  Terminology draft introduces new term "Multi-Device Measurement", but 
it is not used in the Methodology draft.  Can we just remove it from the 
Terminology draft?

4.  In the Methodology draft, Collector is mis-spelled at bottom of page 4 
(appears "colelctor").

Scott

At 08:47 AM 6/17/2003 -0400, Kevin Dubray wrote:
>BMWG'ers:
>
>A WG Last Call period for the Internet-Drafts regarding
>OSPF convergence benchmarking terminology, methodology, and
>benchmark applicability:
>
><draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-term-04.txt>,
><draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-intraarea-05.txt>,
><draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-applicability-03.txt>
>
>will be open from 17 June 2003 until 1 July 2003.
>
>Input from previous WG Last Calls have been incorporated in the I-Ds; the
>editors believe the I-Ds are ready for advancement.
>
>Please weigh in on whether or not you feel each individual draft
>should not be given to the Area Directors for consideration in progressing 
>the draft to an Informational RFC. Send your comments to this list or
>kdubray@juniper.net.
>
>
>URLs for the Internet-Drafts are:
>
>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-term-04.txt
>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-intraarea-05.txt
>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ospfconv-applicability-03.txt
>
>
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