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Re: [bmwg] Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com> Thu, 16 February 2017 13:25 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: Jouni Korhonen <jounikor@gmail.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
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Thanks for your review, Jouni!

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jouni Korhonen [mailto:jounikor@gmail.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, February 15, 2017 3:09 PM
> To: ops-dir@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org;
> bmwg@ietf.org
> Subject: Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04
> 
> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This document was good informational read. No complaints.
> 
> Two editorials:
> 
> Line  338: "...possibility of benchmark curation during development of
> new..."
>   Is it curation or creation?
[ACM] 
curation, meaning that we'll review our benchmarks and
possibly revise them as we develop new methods of measurement.

> 
> Line 409: "..VNF, or something as simple as a new poicy to implement
> in a VNF, .."
>   s/poicy/policy
> 
[ACM] 
thanks for catching that,
Al

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