Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-8021x-03.txt
"C. M. Heard" <heard@pobox.com> Tue, 09 September 2003 07:54 UTC
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To: Kenyon C Norseth <kenyon.c.norseth@L-3com.com>
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Subject: Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-8021x-03.txt
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On Mon, 8 Sep 2003, K.C. Norseth wrote: > > Here is the latest proposed revision to draft-ietf-bridge-8021x-03 > > I have added the changes we have been discussing about > copyright. I have not added the page formatting on this revison > yet. I also have not compiled it yet because I didn't have > access to libsmi this weekend. > > How is this? Comments, suggestions? KC - The MIB module compiles just fine, with or without the changes I sugggest below. When you don't have a MIB compiler installed locally, you can always use the smilint e-mail robot at smilint@ibr.cs.tu-bs.de; for instructions see http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-review-tools.html Anyway, I would like to suggest making the following changes before final submission to the I-D repository: 1.) Update the MIB boilerplate per the latest template at http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-boilerplate.html (this will let you cut out a lot of references) 2.) At the start of Section 4, where the changes are listed, use the past tense (the original mistake was mine). The change is: OLD: - Replace all non-ascii double quotes and apostrophes by the equivalent ASCII characters; - In the MODULE-IDENTITY value assignment change "iso(1)" to "iso"; - Add dot1xPaePortReauthenticate and dot1xAuthSessionUserName to the appropriate conformance groups. NEW: - Replaced all non-ascii double quotes and apostrophes by the equivalent ASCII characters; - In the MODULE-IDENTITY value assignment changed "iso(1)" to "iso"; - Added dot1xPaePortReauthenticate and dot1xAuthSessionUserName to the appropriate conformance groups. 3.) Change the ASN.1 comment block at the beginning of the MIB module by removing the URL. OLD: -- ---------------------------------------------------------- -- -- IEEE 802.1X MIB -- http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/MIBs/802-1x-2001-mib.txt -- ---------------------------------------------------------- -- NEW: -- ---------------------------------------------------------- -- -- IEEE 802.1X MIB -- ---------------------------------------------------------- -- Rationale: the version of the MIB module in this documents isn't quite the same as the version at that URL, and that's explained in detail (with the URL) in the REVISION clause. 3.) Change the LAST-UPDATED date to match the most recent REVISION date. OLD: ieee8021paeMIB MODULE-IDENTITY LAST-UPDATED "200101160000Z" NEW: ieee8021paeMIB MODULE-IDENTITY LAST-UPDATED "200309050000Z" 4.) In the REVISION clauses, align the columns, change to the past tense (as in #2 above), and eliminate the old commented-out MODULE-IDENTITY value since that change is now explained in the REVISION clause. OLD: REVISION "200309050000Z" DESCRIPTION "The IETF published version as in RFC xxxx. The IETF Bridge-mib WG made the following changes: - Replaced all non-ascii double quotes and apostrophes by the equivalent ASCII characters; - In the MODULE-IDENTITY value assignment change 'iso(1)' to 'iso'; - Add dot1xPaePortReauthenticate and dot1xAuthSessionUserName to the appropriate conformance groups. " REVISION "200101160000Z" -- Jan 16th, 2001 DESCRIPTION "The initial and authoritative version as published at: http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/MIBs/802-1x-2001-mib.txt " -- ::= { iso(1) std(0) iso8802(8802) ieee802dot1(1) -- ieee802dot1mibs(1) 1 } ::= { iso std(0) iso8802(8802) ieee802dot1(1) ieee802dot1mibs(1) 1 } NEW: REVISION "200309050000Z" DESCRIPTION "The IETF published version as in RFC xxxx. The IETF Bridge-mib WG made the following changes: - Replaced all non-ascii double quotes and apostrophes by the equivalent ASCII characters; - In the MODULE-IDENTITY value assignment changed 'iso(1)' to 'iso'; - Added dot1xPaePortReauthenticate and dot1xAuthSessionUserName to the appropriate conformance groups. " REVISION "200101160000Z" -- Jan 16th, 2001 DESCRIPTION "The initial and authoritative version as published at: http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/MIBs/802-1x-2001-mib.txt " ::= { iso std(0) iso8802(8802) ieee802dot1(1) ieee802dot1mibs(1) 1 } Rationale: improved appearance, and commented out MODULE-IDENTITY value is no longer needed since the change is documented in the REVISION clause. 5.) In the DESCRIPTION clause of dot1xAuthBackendNonNakResponsesFromSupplicant re-instate an apostrophe which was present (but in non-ASCII form) in the original: OLD: the Supplicant can respond to the Authenticators NEW: the Supplicant can respond to the Authenticator's 6.) Add [RFC2863] and [RFC3411] to the list of normative references, since the MIB module imports from IF-MIB and SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB. Also, move [RFC1213] here since its system group is listed in the text as being a prerequisite (and consider supplementing it with or replacing it by [RFC3418] here and in the text). Move [RFC2571] to the informative references or eliminate it. Summary: [IEEESTD8021] [RFC1213] --> consider supplementing with (or replacing by) [RFC3418] [RFC2578] [RFC2579] [RFC2580] [RFC2863] --> for import FROM IF-MIB [RFC3411] --> for import FROM SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB [8021XAUTH] [8021XSUPP] 7.) Eliminate [RFC1213] and [RFC2863] from the list of informative references, since they are normative. Use [RFC2665] in place of [RFC1284] [RFC1369] [RFC1398] [RFC1643] [RFC1650]. Remove [RFC2119] since you don't cite it or use the keywords it defines (if you did it would have to be a normative reference). And if you agree to use the new boilerplate as suggested in #1 above, all the rest can be replaced by [RFC3410]. Summary: [RFC3411] --> assumes that you use new boilerplate [RFC2665] --> in place of [RFC1284] [RFC1369] [RFC1398] [RFC1643] [RFC1650] 8.) Update the Security Considerations section to conform to the latest template at http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-security.html (this is particularly important to do if you change the boilerplate and references as suggested above). 9.) Revise the Full Copyright Statement to disallow derivative works other than extraction of the MIB module. OLD: Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2003). All Rights Reserved. This document and translations of it may be copied and furnished to others, and derivative works that comment on or otherwise explain it or assist in its implementation may be prepared, copied, published and distributed, in whole or in part, without restriction of any kind, provided that the above copyright notice and this paragraph are included on all such copies and derivative works. However, this document itself may not be modified in any way, such as by removing the copyright notice or references to the Internet Society or other Internet organizations, except as needed for the purpose of developing Internet standards in which case the procedures for copyrights defined in the Internet Standards process must be followed, or as required to translate it into languages other than English. NEW: Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2003). All Rights Reserved. This document and translations of it may be copied and furnished to others provided that the above copyright notice and this paragraph are included on all such copies. However, this document itself may not be modified in any way, such as by removing the copyright notice or references to the Internet Society or other Internet organizations, except as required to translate it into languages other than English, and derivative works of it may not be created, other than to extract the MIB module in Section 4 as-is for separate use. Note to WG members: the text above adapted from the Full Copyright Statement in RFC 3394, with the derivative works modification suggested by section 5.2 of draft-ietf-ipr-submission-rights-07.txt. This deviation from the standard copyright will have to be approved by the IAB, but I think it is appropriate for this document, where the IEEE retains change control over the MIB module. Thanks, Mike Heard _______________________________________________ Bridge-mib mailing list Bridge-mib@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bridge-mib
- [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-8021x-0… Internet-Drafts
- Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… C. M. Heard
- Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… Les Bell
- RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… C. M. Heard
- RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… C. M. Heard
- RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… Les Bell
- RE: [802.1] RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-iet… C. M. Heard
- RE: [802.1] RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-iet… Jim Burns
- Re: [802.1] RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-iet… K.C. Norseth
- Re: [802.1] RE: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-iet… C. M. Heard
- [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-8021x-0… K.C. Norseth
- Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… C. M. Heard
- Re: [Bridge-mib] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-bridge-802… C. M. Heard