Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protocol Action: 'QUIC: A UDP-Based Multiplexed and Secure Transport' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-quic-transport-34.txt)

Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> Thu, 20 May 2021 19:44 UTC

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Hi, Jana.

We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9000

This document will be published along with the other documents in Cluster 430.  If you'd like to follow the progress of this cluster of documents, please see

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/C430

Thank you!

RFC Editor/lb

> On May 20, 2021, at 6:54 AM, Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> 
> Lynne,
> 
> I’ve gone through the change, and I approve the final document.
> 
> Thanks for your work!
> - jana 
> 
> On Wed, May 19, 2021 at 3:25 PM Lynne Bartholomew via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> Hi, Martin.  We've made the fix on our end and reposted the files.  (Even though it's a small update, we made a new iteration.)
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.xml
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-rfcdiff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-auth48diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-lastdiff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-lastrfcdiff.html
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-xmldiff1.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-xmldiff2.html
> 
> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9000
> 
> Thank you!
> 
> RFC Editor/lb
> 
> 
> > On May 19, 2021, at 3:10 PM, Martin Thomson via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > 
> > Please fix this.  We're now at the point where I think you should hold the pen on changes (provided that they remain of this sort of size).
> > 
> > I'll make the same changes on our end so we keep up.
> > 
> > I've now reviewed all the changes and approve of the current document.  
> > 
> > (I understand that this is now mangled by preptool, which I don't like, but that's something I need to take up elsewhere.)
> > 
> > On Thu, May 20, 2021, at 03:24, Lynne Bartholomew via C430 wrote:
> >> Hi, Martin.
> >> 
> >> If you are currently updating this document, would you please change 
> >> the non-ASCII quote before the "10" back to an ASCII quote?
> >> 
> >> 7509           <refcontent>Proceedings of the 10th ACM SIGCOMM 
> >> conference on Internet measurement - IMC ‘10</refcontent>
> >> 
> >> If you're not currently working on it, we will be happy to fix it and 
> >> repost the files.
> >> 
> >> Thank you!
> >> 
> >> RFC Editor/lb
> >> 
> >> 
> >>> On May 18, 2021, at 5:39 PM, Lynne Bartholomew via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>> 
> >>> Hi, Martin.
> >>> 
> >>> We updated the RFC URLs in this document and also added the zero-width space to the CRYPTO_ERROR entry in Table 7.
> >>> 
> >>> The latest files are posted here:
> >>> 
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.txt
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.pdf
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000.xml
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-diff.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-rfcdiff.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-auth48diff.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-lastdiff.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>> 
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-xmldiff1.html
> >>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9000-xmldiff2.html
> >>> 
> >>> Thank you!
> >>> 
> >>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>> 
> >>>> On May 18, 2021, at 5:16 PM, Martin Thomson via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> FWIW, I can put the change into source, but it runs into https://trac.tools.ietf.org/tools/xml2rfc/trac/ticket/548 (it isn't kramdown); so we won't be able to reproduce this on our end.
> >>>> 
> >>>> On Wed, May 19, 2021, at 10:12, Martin Thomson via C430 wrote:
> >>>>> On Wed, May 19, 2021, at 09:37, Lynne Bartholomew via C430 wrote:
> >>>>>> Hi, Martin.
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>> Apologies for the oversight previously -- we think that in line with 
> >>>>>> updates to Table 3 and the entry in Section 20.1 for CRYPTO_ERROR, the 
> >>>>>> spaces around the "-" in the CRYPTO_ERROR row in Table 7 should be 
> >>>>>> removed.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Yeah, I wanted to do that, but I didn't want to break the table and had 
> >>>>> no means to do zero-width spaces (kramdown doesn't support that as far 
> >>>>> as I'm aware).
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> If you can add the zero-width space, that would be OK.  The output 
> >>>>> looks fine.  (I'll try to wrestle the character into our source as 
> >>>>> well.)
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> <br/> seems like the wrong solution here.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Cheers,
> >>>>> Martin
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