Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic-recovery-34.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
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I believe this looks correct, but I have one question as a person going through this process for the first time. I noticed the /rfc/ page was changed to /info/. Is /info/, ie: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8985, the preferred reference URL? I only ask because I have never seen that style RFC page before this evening. Thanks, Ian On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 1:18 PM Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote: > Martin, > > Thank you for the updated file. As we did in RFC 9001, we have > explicitly set the URLs in the XML file to fix the discrepancy in > xml2rfc output: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002-xmllastrfcdiff.html (these > changes in the XML) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002-lastrfcdiff.html (these > changes in the text) > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9002.xml > > We will await further word from Jana and Ian regarding other AUTH48 > changes and/or approval. > > Best regards, > > RFC Editor/jm > > > On 5/17/21 7:16 PM, Martin Thomson via C430 wrote: > > I have these changes staged in our copy and can provide an update based > on that. I don't know how the rfc-editor.org links got broken though: > the XML I have uses /info/ for all RFC reference targets. > > > > On Tue, May 18, 2021, at 10:02, Jana Iyengar via C430 wrote: > >> Jean, Ian, > >> > >> Given that we are making these changes for the transport document, it > >> might make sense for us to do these as well. Also so that our github > >> repo is in line with what eventually gets published. I'm happy to make > >> these changes. > >> > >> - jana > >> > >> On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 3:32 PM Ian Swett via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > >>> Thanks, please make those updates. > >>> > >>> On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 5:25 PM Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> > wrote: > >>>> Ian, > >>>> Thank you for the updated document! We found a few small issues: > >>>>> We found a typo ("itsestimate") in the XML that is not present in > the markdown file in GitHub: > >>>>> This also > >> allows a connection to reset itsestimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt > >> after a disruptive network event; see Section 5.3. > >>>>> In our edits, we had updated the [RACK] reference from > draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-15 to the RFC that replaced it (RFC 8985). We see that > the reference has changed back to draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-15. Is this > intentional? > >>>>> In the References section, the URLs for RFCs should point to the RFC > landing page ("/info/" instead of "/rfc/"): > >>>>> Current: <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfcNNNN> > >>>>> Should be: <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfcNNNN> > >> > >>>> Would you like us to make these updates or would you like to update > the file? > >>>> Best regards, > >>>> RFC Editor/jm > >>>> On 5/7/21 12:57 PM, Ian Swett wrote: > >>>>> Similar to Martin, I'm writing PRs to address these issues. > >>>>> > >>>>> Changes are in PR #4892 < > https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4892> unless otherwise noted. > I've gone over the changes with Jana and he's now approved the relevant > PRs, so I think we're good to go. > >>>>> > >>>>> On Thu, Apr 29, 2021 at 2:19 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>>>> Authors, > >>>>>> > >>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve > >>>>>> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML > file. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > appear in > >>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Thanks, in https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4890 > >>>>> > >>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the cross reference to point to > RFC 6298 > >>>>>> ("Computing TCP's Retransmission Timer") instead of RFC 6297 ("A > Survey of > >>>>>> Lower-than-Best-Effort Transport Protocols"). Please let us know if > >>>>>> other changes are necessary. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Original: > >>>>>> QUIC uses a probe timeout (PTO; see Section 6.2), with a timer > based > >>>>>> on TCP's RTO computation; see [RFC6297]. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> QUIC uses a probe timeout (PTO; see Section 6.2), with a timer > based > >>>>>> on TCP's retransmission timeout (RTO) computation; see > [RFC6298]. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Thanks for catching that! > >>>>> > >>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Does the following improve the readability of the > paragraph? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> Endpoints SHOULD set the min_rtt to the newest RTT sample after > >>>>>> persistent congestion is established. This is to allow a > connection > >>>>>> to reset its estimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt after a > >>>>>> disruptive network event (Section 5.3), and because it is > possible > >>>>>> that an increase in path delay resulted in persistent congestion > >>>>>> being incorrectly declared. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> Endpoints SHOULD set the min_rtt to the newest RTT sample after > >>>>>> persistent congestion is established because it is possible that > >>>>>> an increase in path delay resulted in persistent congestion > being > >>>>>> incorrectly declared. This also allows a connection to reset its > >>>>>> estimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt after a disruptive network > >>>>>> event (Section 5.3). > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> I agree this is more readable, but it is subtly different, so I put > it in a separate PR: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4891 > >>>>> > >>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] In the following sentence, do implementations also > >>>>>> increase the time threshold? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> Implementations can detect spurious retransmissions and > increase > >>>>>> the reordering threshold in packets or time to reduce future > >>>>>> spurious retransmissions and loss events. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> Implementations can detect spurious retransmissions and can > increase > >>>>>> the reordering threshold in packets or increase the time > threshold > >>>>>> in order to reduce future spurious retransmissions and loss > events. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Changed to "the packet or time reordering threshold to reduce..." to > clarify. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have marked this Note as an <aside>. > >>>>>> <aside> is defined as follows: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> From https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/xml2rfc-doc.html#name-aside-2 > >>>>>> This element is a container for content that is semantically > >>>>>> less important or tangential to the content that surrounds it. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Please let us know if any updates are needed. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Included in https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>>>> > >>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following term appears to > be used > >>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know > if/how they > >>>>>> may be made consistent. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> application data / Application Data > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Note that RFC-to-be 9000 <draft-ietf-quic-transport> uses the > lowercase > >>>>>> form consistently. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> We raised a similar question for RFC-to-be 9001; the authors > decided on the following: > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> The outcome is that figures will use title case for consistency > (as appropriate) > >>>>>>> and text will use the lowercase form. There is one reference to > TLS > >>>>>>> Application Data, where I have kept the title case to match the > usage in RFC 8446. > >>>>>> (see > https://www.rfc-editor.org/pipermail/c430/2021-April/000016.html) > >>>>>> > >>>>>> --> > >>>>> I changed the text to use "Application Data" when referring to the > packet number space, and "application data" otherwise. > >>>>> https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4893 > >>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the following > sentence. > >>>>>> Could the packets be acknowledged if the keys were still available? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> Initial packets and Handshake packets could be never > acknowledged, > >>>>>> but they are removed from bytes in flight when the Initial and > >>>>>> Handshake keys are discarded > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> When the Initial and Handshake keys are discarded, the Initial > >>>>>> packets and Handshake packets can no longer be acknowledged, and > >>>>>> they are removed from bytes in flight > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Yes, the packets can be acknowledged until the keys are discarded, > so I took your suggestion and added 'keys' after the first 'Initial' for > parallelism. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] In the following, is "PTO timer" rather than > "probe timer" > >>>>>> meant? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> That is, the client MUST set the probe timer if the client has > not > >>>>>> received an acknowledgment for any of its Handshake packets and > the > >>>>>> handshake is not confirmed (see Section 4.1.2 of [QUIC-TLS]), > even > >>>>>> if there are no packets in flight. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Yes, at some point we were using "probe timer" and "PTO timer" > interchangeably, but it's best to consistently use PTO timer. Fixed. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the following: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> It is expected that keys are discarded after packets encrypted > with > >>>>>> them would be acknowledged or declared lost. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> It is expected that keys are discarded at some time after the > >>>>>> packets encrypted with them are either acknowledged or declared > lost. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Or perhaps: > >>>>>> Some time after the packets are either acknowledged or declared > lost, > >>>>>> the keys with which they were encrypted are discarded. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> The first suggestion is good, so I will use that. The second > suggestion doesn't fully convey the intent of the sentence, IMHO. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 9000 (draft-ietf-quic-transport) > uses > >>>>>> <tt> for some equations. Please review and let us know if you > would like > >>>>>> the equations to appear in <tt>. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> Packets 2 through 8 are declared lost when the acknowledgment > for > >>>>>> packet 9 is received at t = 12.2. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> The congestion period is calculated as the time between the > oldest > >>>>>> and newest lost packets: 8 - 1 = 7. The persistent congestion > >>>>>> duration is: 2 * 3 = 6. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Good point, MT changed in > https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>>>> > >>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Does the following reordering of the sentences > improve > >>>>>> readability? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Current: > >>>>>> When bytes in flight is smaller than the congestion window and > >>>>>> sending is not pacing limited, the congestion window is > >>>>>> underutilized. When this occurs, the congestion window SHOULD > NOT be > >>>>>> increased in either slow start or congestion avoidance. This > can > >>>>>> happen due to insufficient application data or flow control > limits. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> When the count of bytes in flight is smaller than the congestion > >>>>>> window and sending is not pacing limited, the congestion window > is > >>>>>> underutilized, which can happen due to insufficient application > >>>>>> data or reduced flow control limits. When this occurs in > either the > >>>>>> slow start or congestion avoidance states, the congestion window > >>>>>> SHOULD NOT be increased. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> I think the reordering reads more clearly, but the addition of > "count of" does not help, so I swapped the second and third sentences. > >>>>> > >>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] We did not find the paper below published in > January 1995. > >>>>>> We did find one published in 1987 and a revision published in 1991. > >>>>>> Which one should be referenced? > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Original: > >>>>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM > SIGCOMM > >>>>>> CCR , January 1995. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM > SIGCOMM > >>>>>> Computer Communication Review, DOI > 10.1145/55483.55484, > >>>>>> August 1987, <https://doi.org/10.1145/55483.55484>. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Or perhaps: > >>>>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM > Transactions > >>>>>> on Computer Systems, DOI 10.1145/118544.118549, > >>>>>> November 1991, < > https://doi.org/10.1145/118544.118549>. > >>>>>> --> > >>>>>> > >>>>> Martin put this into https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>>>> > >>>>>> Thank you. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> RFC Editor > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> On Apr 29, 2021, at 11:14 AM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> *****IMPORTANT***** > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Updated 2021/04/29 > >>>>>> > >>>>>> RFC Author(s): > >>>>>> -------------- > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… rfc-editor
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
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- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney