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Re: [Cacao] Public Comment for CACAO Draft

Bret Jordan <jordan.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 15 December 2020 06:32 UTC

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Yes, there is several full examples in the appendix.  Also, there will be another public review coming up in the next few days. I will make sure to post to the list when it opens.

Bret


> On Sep 25, 2020, at 1:04 PM, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> wrote:
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> Congrats, it looks like an interesting document on first review.
> I found having section 2 full of data types at the beginning a bit jarring.
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> Are there some real-life examples of entire documents?
> I saw many snippets of examples in the document, but I didn't see a complete
> one.  Maybe I missed it.
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> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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