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Re: [calsify] Review: draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-05

Michael Douglass <mikeadouglass@gmail.com> Wed, 05 August 2020 16:22 UTC

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To: Bron Gondwana <brong@fastmailteam.com>, calsify@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [calsify] Review: draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-05
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On 8/3/20 19:52, Bron Gondwana wrote:
> Hi Mike,
>
> Thanks for uploading the latest ical relations.  Here's a quick review 
> of a couple of tiny changes needed!
>
> And I need you to confirm that there's no IPR that you're aware of :)
I can confirm there is no IPR I'm aware of
>
> Thanks,
>
> Bron.
>
> *REVIEW:
> *
>
> *Abstract:
> *
>
> nits complains:
>
>    ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5545]), which it
>       shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
>       documents in question.
>
> Please change it not to be a reference in the Abstract (it's OK to 
> have a reference in the Introduction)
>
> *1.4 Link*
>
> See [I-D.daboo-caldav-attachments]
>
> Please update this reference to be RFC8607.
>
> *7.1. Concept*
>
> There's a bug in the example:
>
>       SCONCEPT:http://example.com/event-types/sports
>       CONCEPT:http://example.com/event-types/arts/music
>       CONCEPT:http://example.com/task-types/delivery
>
> Please remove the leading 'S'!
>
> ...
>
> I think that's everything I can see :)
>
> Cheers,
>
> Bron.
>
> --
>   Bron Gondwana, CEO, Fastmail Pty Ltd
>   brong@fastmailteam.com
>
>

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