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Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-32.txt> (JSCalendar: A JSON representation of calendar data) to Proposed Standard

Michael Douglass <mikeadouglass@gmail.com> Thu, 20 May 2021 02:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-32.txt> (JSCalendar: A JSON representation of calendar data) to Proposed Standard
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On 5/19/21 21:19, Neil Jenkins wrote:
> On Wed, 19 May 2021, at 22:17, Ken Murchison wrote:
>>
>> A couple of nits however.
>>
>> Section 4.1.2:
>>
>> *For recurring events and tasks, the UID is associated with the 
>> master object and so is the ^^  same for all occurrences;*
>>
>> Should this be "therefore" instead of "so" ?
>>
>
> I would read that identically. What do you understand as the semantic 
> difference between "so" and "therefore" here?

"so" has the sense "as a result"

"therefore" has the sense  of "that is why" or "as a consequence"

So (or therefore) I think I agree with Ken

> **
>>
>> Section 4.4.6, "email":
>>
>> This is the email address*of the participant to contact the participant...*
>>
>> The above doesn't sound right to me.  Perhaps "This is the email 
>> address used to contact the participant..." is better?
>>
>
> Yeah, it's a little clumsy. I think we could replace "of the 
> participant" with "to use".
>
> Neil.
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