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Date: Tue, 04 Aug 2020 09:52:53 +1000
From: Bron Gondwana <brong@fastmailteam.com>
To: calsify@ietf.org, Douglass Mike <mikeadouglass@gmail.com>
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Subject: [calsify] Review: draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-05
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Hi Mike,

Thanks for uploading the latest ical relations.  Here's a quick review of a couple of tiny changes needed!

And I need you to confirm that there's no IPR that you're aware of :)

Thanks,

Bron.

*REVIEW:
*

*Abstract:
*

nits complains:

  ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5545]), which it
     shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
     documents in question.

Please change it not to be a reference in the Abstract (it's OK to have a reference in the Introduction)

*1.4 Link*

    See [I-D.daboo-caldav-attachments]

Please update this reference to be RFC8607.

*7.1. Concept*

There's a bug in the example:

     SCONCEPT:http://example.com/event-types/sports
     CONCEPT:http://example.com/event-types/arts/music
     CONCEPT:http://example.com/task-types/delivery

Please remove the leading 'S'!

...

I think that's everything I can see :)

Cheers,

Bron.

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