Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-32.txt> (JSCalendar: A JSON representation of calendar data) to Proposed Standard
Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com> Thu, 20 May 2021 01:19 UTC
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Date: Thu, 20 May 2021 11:19:46 +1000
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On Wed, 19 May 2021, at 22:17, Ken Murchison wrote:
> A couple of nits however.
> Section 4.1.2:
> *For recurring events and
tasks, the UID is associated with the master object and so is the
^^
same for all occurrences;*
> Should this be "therefore" instead of "so" ?
I would read that identically. What do you understand as the semantic difference between "so" and "therefore" here?
* *
> Section 4.4.6, "email":
> This is the email address *of the participant to contact the
participant...*
> The above doesn't sound right to me. Perhaps "This is the email address used to contact the participant..." is better?
Yeah, it's a little clumsy. I think we could replace "of the participant" with "to use".
Neil.
- [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calext-js… The IESG
- Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calex… Ken Murchison
- Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calex… Neil Jenkins
- Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calex… Michael Douglass
- Re: [calsify] SECOND Last Call: <draft-ietf-calex… Neil Jenkins