[calsify] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 15 February 2021 10:32 UTC

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Subject: [calsify] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2021-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. The structured-location is optional so if it is not specified for proximity
I assume that it implies current location?

[calsify] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-c… Roni Even via Datatracker
Re: [calsify] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ken Murchison
Re: [calsify] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Roni Even
Re: [calsify] [Gen-art] Genart last call review o… Alissa Cooper