[Captive-portals] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 07 June 2020 04:00 UTC

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Subject: [Captive-portals] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: No Objection

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Pretty straightforward.  Looking forward to the API document.

Some nits:

Although I see why you did it, the capitalization of the bullet list in Section
3.2 appears peculiar.

Also curious is that "User Equipment" is defined in Section 2.1, but not
shortened to "UE" anywhere other than in Section 3.5.

In Section 4.1, what's an "RA"?