[Captive-portals] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: (with COMMENT)

Martin Duke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 06 June 2020 05:49 UTC

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Subject: [Captive-portals] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: (with COMMENT)
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Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I found the terminology around “Captive Portal API server” and “Captive Portal
Server” to be a little confusing, as these are similar terms. The latter also
doesn’t get its own discussion in Section 2 and is confusingly called the “web
portal server” in Figure 1.

After Figure 1, this seems to be consistently called the “web portal” (sec 2.6
and 4). It would be great to unify the terminology across the document as a
whole.