[Captive-portals] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: (with COMMENT)

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Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I found this document easy to read, but have a few comments.

I support the 3rd bullet of Ben's discuss.

I was surprised by the diagram in section 2.6, since it seems to imply that the
Provisioning Service kicks everything off, but I would have expected the User
equipment to initiate the flow, which is articulated in the first step of
section 4.1.  Hence, I think that the diagram could be more clear if it also
showed the initial request from the client (as per the first step in 4.1).

Finally, I note that this document makes no mention of OAM considerations. 
Having some text covering these aspects would probably be beneficial.