Re: [Cbor] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-cbor-network-addresses-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Michael Richardson <mcr@sandelman.ca> Tue, 05 October 2021 17:15 UTC

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Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
    > Thank you also to Donald Eastlake for this INT directorate review that I am
    > vastly supporting:
    > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/6Ox8iEBMqXkUoC2aUEF3wi4-c5g/

I have added one oxford comma, I didn't find more missing.

I have adopted Donald's suggested text.
I have removed "Note that" as he suggested.