Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt> (A YANG Data Model for WSON (Wavelength Switched Optical Networks)) to Proposed Standard

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt> (A YANG Data Model for WSON (Wavelength Switched Optical Networks)) to Proposed Standard
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On 16/09/2020 21:45, The IESG wrote:
>
> The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and Measurement Plane
> WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for WSON
> (Wavelength Switched Optical Networks)'
>    <draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt> as Proposed Standard
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Two glitches and some trivia:

Introduction
/impairement/impairment/

The only key word I see is a 'should' in IANA which is going to go so 
whether or not Requirements Language should be included is a moot point.

YANG import for layer0-types references the wrong I-D

YANG module description talks of two encoding documents but omits RFC7581

grouping wson-node-attributes has the same 'e.g.' for both true and 
false which looks odd; and I wonder if 'i.e.' is intended

the e-mail address for Aihua Guo is different for the YANG module and 
for Authors' Addresses

Tom Petch

> Abstract
>
>
>     This document provides a YANG data model for the routing and
>     wavelength assignment (RWA) TE topology in wavelength switched
>     optical networks (WSONs).  The YANG data model defined in this
>     document conforms to the Network Management Datastore Architecture
>     (NMDA).
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> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang/
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>
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> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
>
>
> The document contains these normative downward references.
> See RFC 3967 for additional information:
>      draft-ietf-ccamp-optical-impairment-topology-yang: A Yang Data Model for Optical Impairment-aware Topology (None - IETF stream)
>      draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang: YANG data model for Flexi-Grid Optical Networks (None - IETF stream)
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