[CCAMP] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang
Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Sun, 10 July 2022 10:54 UTC
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Subject: [CCAMP] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang
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Hi and welcome onboard.
This is draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang en route for publication as an
RFC. My name is Adrian and I will be your document shepherd for this
journey. Please take your seats and fasten your seatbelts.
Thank you for having kept your draft clean for I-D nits and YANG
validation.
Below you'll see a few very minor nits and an insignificant question. If
you could address them with a new revision or answers, I can move
ahead with the shepherd write-up.
Thanks,
Adrian
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I think the first line of Figure 1 should read...
| l0-types | ietf-layer0-types | [RFC9093] |
---
5.1
s/ietf- te-topology/ietf-te-topology/
s/an flexi-Grid/a flexi-Grid/
s/flexi-Grid/flexi-grid/ (three times)
---
5.2
s/flexi-Grid/flexi-grid/ (twice)
---
5.4
s/flexi-Grid/flexi-grid/
---
I wondered whether it would be helpful to point at RFC 8363, but if you
don't think so, that is fine.
- [CCAMP] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [CCAMP] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-ccamp-f… Daniel King