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Re: [CCAMP] comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-08

"Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com> Thu, 24 July 2014 19:33 UTC

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From: "Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com>
To: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, "draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp@tools.ietf.org>
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Hi Deborah,

Thank you for reviewing the document and providing the comments.

Please see inline.. <RG>.


On 2014-05-13 10:34 PM, "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com> wrote:

>Hi Rakesh,
>
>A couple of additional comments:
>- you swapped [Extended] to (Extended) in Section 3 (and later in the
>document), whereas in Section 4, you removed the brackets. As Lou said
>previously, this is not needed and it is confusing as it's not aligned
>with RFC6780.

<RG> Addressed as part of Lou's comments. Please let me know if latest
revision is OK.


>- Section 3 on provisioning and signaling procedures needs 2219 language.


<RG> Section 3 is a definition of terms/overview/information kind of
section and hence it does not use normative language. Section 4 and 5 are
object formats and procedure/rules and are using normative language.


>- you changed the text in the introduction, and now have MPLS-TP
>requirement 14 twice listed. The previous version was better organized.
>It seems the rationale for repeating requirement 14 was to add a new
>paragraph describing Internet services applications. As this document is
>on meeting the referenced MPLS-TP requirements, this is out-of-context.
>Suggest going back to the previous version's introduction.


<RG> Good catch. I revised the Introduction section to remove the
duplication. It is good to see all the requirements listed in one section
and hence the change.


>- As Lou previously suggested, for the compatibility, you noted
>compatibility aspects for intermediate nodes, it would be also helpful to
>add RFC's 6780 processing rules for egress nodes not supporting the
>Extended Association C-Type.


<RG> New revision has the text. Please advise if it is OK.


Many thanks,
Rakesh


>
>Thanks,
>Deborah
>
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