[CCAMP] FW: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4803 (3831)

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Thu, 12 December 2013 18:55 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Subject: [CCAMP] FW: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4803 (3831)
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BTW, I have passed this to Stewart for resolution, so any comments should be
copied to him.

Adrian

> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org]
> Sent: 12 December 2013 15:22
> To: tnadeau@cisco.com; adrian@olddog.co.uk; stbryant@cisco.com;
> adrian@olddog.co.uk; lberger@labn.net; dbrungard@att.com
> Cc: adrian@olddog.co.uk; ccamp@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4803 (3831)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4803,
> "Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Label Switching Router
(LSR)
> Management Information Base".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=4803&eid=3831
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
> 
> Section: 6
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    In mplsXCTable:
>    {
>       mplsXCIndex                = 0x01,
>       mplsXCInSegmentIndex       = 0x00000015,
>       mplsXCOutSegmentIndex      = 0x00000012,
>       mplsXCLspId                = 0x0102 -- unique ID
>       mplsXCLabelStackIndex      = 0x00, -- only a single outgoing label
>       mplsXCRowStatus            = createAndGo(4)
>    }
> 
>    In mplsXCTable:
>    {
>       mplsXCIndex                = 0x02,
>       mplsXCInSegmentIndex       = 0x00000016,
>       mplsXCOutSegmentIndex      = 0x00000013,
>       mplsXCLspId                = 0x0102 -- unique ID
>       mplsXCLabelStackIndex      = 0x00, -- only a single outgoing label
>       mplsXCRowStatus            = createAndGo(4)
>    }
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    In mplsXCTable:
>    {
>       mplsXCIndex                = 0x01,
>       mplsXCInSegmentIndex       = 0x00000015,
>       mplsXCOutSegmentIndex      = 0x00000012,
>       mplsXCLspId                = 0x0102 -- unique ID
>       mplsXCLabelStackIndex      = 0x00, -- only a single outgoing label
>       mplsXCRowStatus            = createAndGo(4)
>    }
> 
>    In mplsXCTable:
>    {
>       mplsXCIndex                = 0x01,
>       mplsXCInSegmentIndex       = 0x00000016,
>       mplsXCOutSegmentIndex      = 0x00000013,
>       mplsXCLspId                = 0x0102 -- unique ID
>       mplsXCLabelStackIndex      = 0x00, -- only a single outgoing label
>       mplsXCRowStatus            = createAndGo(4)
>    }
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The entries in the mplsXCTable are indexed by {mplsXCIndex,
> mplsXCInSegmentIndex, mplsOutSegmentIndex}. All XC entries for the same LSP
> should share a common value of mplsXCIndex because mplsTunnelXCPointer can
> be set to point to the first entry and then all of the other entries can be
found.
> 
> The error in the example in Section 6 is that it shows a different value of
> mplsXCIndex for the reverse direction cross-connects. It should be set to the
> same value as is used for the forward direction cross-connect.
> 
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
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> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC4803 (draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Label
Switching
> Router (LSR) Management Information Base
> Publication Date    : February 2007
> Author(s)           : T. Nadeau, Ed., A. Farrel, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG