Re: [CCAMP] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model-04.txt

"Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology Research Dept)" <zhenghaomian@huawei.com> Thu, 23 August 2018 08:31 UTC

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From: "Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology Research Dept)" <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
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Hi, Tom,

Thanks for point this out, we update the draft, with corresponding correction. 

Best wishes,
Haomian

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: tom petch [mailto:ietfc@btconnect.com] 
发送时间: 2018年8月14日 19:50
收件人: Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology Research Dept) <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>om>; ccamp@ietf.org
主题: Re: [CCAMP] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model-04.txt

Meanwhile, there are my usual red tape issues.
 - no copyright in the YANG modules
 - no RFC Editor note asking them to update the dates in the modules
 - no YANG reference statements for the import YANG statements
- YANG Tree diagrams is now an RFC
 - no I-D Reference for G.709 as referenced in the module

I find the layout of IANA considerations not as clear as it might be. I suggest

OLD

It is proposed that IANA should assign new URIs from the "IETF XML
   Registry" [RFC3688] as follows: URI:
   urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-tunnel Registrant Contact: The
   IESG XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.  URI:
   urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-types Registrant Contact: The
   IESG XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.  This document
   registers following YANG modules in the YANG Module Names registry
   [RFC7950].  name: ietf-otn-tunnel namespace:
   urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-tunnel prefix: otn-tunnel
   reference: RFC XXXX name: ietf-otn-types namespace:
   urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-types prefix: otn-types
   reference: RFC XXXX

NEW

IANA is asked to assign URIs from the "IETF XML Registry" [RFC3688] as
follows:

URI:  urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-tunnel
Registrant Contact: The  IESG
XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.

URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-types
Registrant Contact: The IESG
XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.

IANA is asked to record YANG module names in the "YANG Module Names" registry [RFC6020] as follows:

name: ietf-otn-tunnel namespace:
urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-tunnel
prefix: otn-tunnel
reference: RFC XXXX

name: ietf-otn-types namespace:
urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-otn-types
prefix: otn-types
reference: RFC XXXX

Just a few more newlines

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology Research Dept)" <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
To: <ccamp@ietf.org>
Sent: Friday, August 10, 2018 8:15 AM

> Dear WG,
>
> We update the draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model, mainly updating the
ietf-otn-types.yang by cleaning the identities. The types model is imported in the other draft draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang for YANG doctor review.
>
> Thank you.
>
> Best wishes,
> Haomian
>
> -----邮件原件-----
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> 发送时间: 2018年8月10日 15:10
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> 主题: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model-04.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane
WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : OTN Tunnel YANG Model
>         Authors         : Haomian Zheng
>                           Aihua Guo
>                           Italo Busi
>                           Anurag Sharma
>                           Rajan Rao
>                           Sergio Belotti
>                           Victor Lopez
>                           Yunbo Li
>                           Yunbin Xu
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model-04.txt
> Pages           : 62
> Date            : 2018-08-10
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the YANG data model for OTN Tunnels.
>
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