[CCAMP] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-06
Carl Moberg <calle@tail-f.com> Wed, 19 December 2018 15:55 UTC
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Reviewer: Carl Moberg Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the YANG doctors directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document includes two YANG modules: - ietf-alarms-x733@2018-11-22.yang - ietf-alarms@2018-11-22.yang ..and an example YANG module: - example-xyz-alarms.yang The modules are valid, well-written, concise and provide ample documentation. I have pointed out two small spelling errors in descriptive text, but will leave it to the editors to decide on the potential need for submitting a new version.
- [CCAMP] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-iet… Carl Moberg
- Re: [CCAMP] Yangdoctors last call review of draft… Daniele Ceccarelli