Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 0 Types) to Proposed Standard

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 0 Types) to Proposed Standard
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Please do not 'reply all' to the e-mail I just posted on layer0-types.  I made a mess of my reply to Last Call and managed to include the IESG Secretary who pointed this out to me 10 seconds after I realised what I had done:-(

Tom Petch
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Sent: 18 September 2020 17:13
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Cc: ccamp@ietf.org; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 0 Types) to Proposed Standard

The YANG module references RFC4203, RFC7699 and G.694.2 but the I-D does
not so these need adding. I note that the other references from the YANG
are all Informative which seems to me debatable.

grouping wson-label-start-end is introduced as
'A YANG grouping that defines the label-start and label-end'
which leads me to expect two leaf but there is only one; the YANG
description is
"The WSON label-start or label-end ...
which seems more accurate but since the grouping is a choice of cwdm or
dwdm could it find uses which are neither start nor end in which case a
different name would be even more appropriate?

grouping flexi-grid-label-start-end is introduced as
'A YANG grouping that defines the label-start and label-end '
and again there is only one leaf; the YANG description is
"Label-start and Label-end information for Flexi-grid."
which seems equally inappropriate.  I cannot see any uses of this
grouping - I note that draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-yang has not been
updated to match this I-D - and since it is but one leaf, not even a
choice, I wonder why it warrants a grouping with the increased
difficulty of comprehension that groupings introduce.

leaf min-slot-width-factor {type uint16 {range "1..max";}
            default 1;
leaf max-slot-width-factor {type uint16 {range "1..max";
but with no default. Worth a YANG conditional perhaps for max>min or
max>=min as appropriate.  Can they be equal?  the equal ranges imply so
but has it any particular meaning?

I wonder how often l0 will be construed as ten or ell-oh with an
attendant error!

Tom Petch


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