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Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Wed, 21 November 2018 16:20 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05
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Daniele

Some non-technical comments

IANA Considerations seems not to register ietf-alarms-x733

X.721 is referenced in the module but not in I-D References

YANG module quotes RFC2119 but not RFC8174

Dates in examples are 2015 - 2018 might give a better impression

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>
To: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>;
<ccamp@ietf.org>
Sent: Wednesday, November 21, 2018 2:32 PM


> Working group,
>
> The last call is now concluded. I take the lack of comments as a "we
already
> discussed a lot this draft during its life as WG document" and hence
proceed
> with the request for publication.
>
> Even if among the authors we have a huge level of competence in YANG
> modelling we'll request for a YANG doctors review as a pair of fresh
eyes is
> in any case helpful.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Daniele
>
> From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Daniele Ceccarelli
> Sent: den 7 november 2018 12:18
> To: CCAMP (ccamp@ietf.org) <ccamp@ietf.org>
> Subject: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05
>
>
>
> Working group,
>
>
>
> Thanks to the fast IPR replies from the authors we're ready to start a
two
> weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05.
>
> The last call ends on Wednesday November 21st . Please send you
comments to
> the CCAMP mailing list.
>
> Also comments along the lines of "I've reviewed the draft and believe
it's
> ready for publication" are valuable.
>
>
>
> Authors, please threat pending comments as part of the last call ones.
>
>
>
> All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been
collected
> and can be found in the history of the document:
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module/history/
>
> Please note that no IPR has been disclosed against the document.
>
>
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Daniele, Fatai, Oscar
>
>
>
>


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