Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18.txt
Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com> Fri, 14 December 2018 15:22 UTC
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18.txt
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Hi Tom, Thanks for your further comment. It is well noted and agreed. Please see inline for additional comment. Thanks. You ng -----Original Message----- From: tom petch [mailto:ietfc@btconnect.com] Sent: Friday, December 7, 2018 6:49 AM To: Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com>; ccamp@ietf.org Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18.txt ----- Original Message ----- From: "Leeyoung" <leeyoung@huawei.com> To: <ccamp@ietf.org> Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:23 PM > > This revision, we hope, incorporated all comments from Tom and others. The co-authors believe that it is ready for WG LC. Almost but I fear that there is a step backwards as well. You still have two Wavelenghth which should probably be Wavelength YL>> Yes, thanks for catching this. More problematically, you have introduced description " ... The YANG model described in this document is a WSON technology-specific YANG model augmenting the generic TE topology module [TE-TOPO] based on the information model developed in [RFC7446] and the two encoding documents [RFC7581] and [RFC7579] that developed protocol independent encodings based on [RFC7446]. Those [RFC..] look like XML/HTML style references which will not do. A YANG module must be plain text so RFC6163 is fine in a YANG module but [RFC6163] is not, which is why, in my last comment, I suggested putting a reference to RFC6163 in section 1.4 lest you get an unused reference for the I-D; which you have done, so that is fine, but all those [RFC...] in the YANG module must go. AFAICS it is only the description clause that has them. YL>> OK. Will remove the reference brackets within the YANG modules. For TE-TOPO, you need to use the same text as you have correctly done on the YANG import statement i.e. "RFC YYYY: YANG Data Model for Traffic Engineering (TE) Topologies"; /* Note: The RFC Editor will replace YYYY with the number assigned to the RFC once draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo becomes an RFC.*/ YL>> OK. Whether this is fixed before or after Last Call is one for the WG Chairs. I probably said before that the nature of the module, which you are forced to use because of the way that tet: is structured, makes the module very hard to read and that I have not done; I hope to but may never find the time. YL>> Yes, we are augmenting all groupings from TE-topo model which is in the RFC Editor's Queue now and any fix should've been done before this stage. Tom Petch > Thanks & best regards, > Young > > -----Original Message----- > From: CCAMP [mailto:ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org > Sent: Wednesday, December 5, 2018 11:18 AM > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org > Cc: ccamp@ietf.org > Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane WG of the IETF. > > Title : A YANG Data Model for WSON (Wavelength Switched Optical Networks) > Authors : Young Lee > Dhruv Dhody > Aihua Guo > Victor Lopez > Daniel King > Filename : draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18.txt > Pages : 77 > Date : 2018-12-05 > > Abstract: > This document provides a YANG data model for the routing and > wavelength assignment (RWA) TE topology in wavelength switched > optical networks (WSONs). The YANG data model defined in this > document conforms to the Network Management Datastore Architecture > defined in RFC 8342. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > CCAMP mailing list > CCAMP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp > > _______________________________________________ > CCAMP mailing list > CCAMP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp
- [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-18… internet-drafts
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Beller, Dieter (Nokia - DE/Stuttgart)
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Aihuaguo (Aihua Guo, CRC)
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yan… Leeyoung