Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode
Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Thu, 30 January 2014 13:46 UTC
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode
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Young, Looks good to me. Much thanks, Lou On 1/30/2014 1:26 AM, Leeyoung wrote: > Hi Lou, > > Please see inline for my comments. Here's working version draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode-14 and the idnits results. > > Let me know if this is ready to publish. > > Thanks. > Young > > -----Original Message----- > From: Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net] > Sent: Tuesday, January 28, 2014 4:35 PM > To: Leeyoung; CCAMP; draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode@tools.ietf.org > Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode > > Young, > > > On 1/27/2014 8:04 PM, Leeyoung wrote: >> Hi Lou, >> >> All missing references are added. >> >> Yes, the "second 32 bit field is referring to "Additional fields as necessary per action" field shown on page 14." >> >> Old: The second 32 bit field is a part of the base label used as a starting point in many of the specific formats. >> New: The second 32 bit field (which is referred to by "Additional fields as necessary per action" in the below encoding) is a part of the base label used in many of the specific formats. > > Well, this still isn't clear as the packet diagram doesn't show a 32 bit field, it shows a variable length one. How about: > OLD > The second 32 bit field (which is referred to by "Additional fields > as necessary per action" in the below encoding) is a part of the > base label used in many of the specific formats. > and > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | Additional fields as necessary per action | > | | > > NEW > Action specific fields are defined below. > and > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | (Action specific fields) | > | .... | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > YOUNG>> This is fine with me. Accepted. > > > Also, just noticed: > 2.2.3. LABEL_RANGE1 > > What does the 1 indicate in the name? > > YOUNG>> Deleted "1". > > Much thanks, > Lou > >> >> Attached is a working version of draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode-14.txt. >> >> Let me know if this is ready to publish. >> >> Regards, >> Young >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net] >> Sent: Monday, January 20, 2014 1:53 PM >> To: Leeyoung; CCAMP; >> draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode@tools.ietf.org >> Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - >> draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode >> >> Young, (all), >> >> You have two idnit issues: >> == Missing Reference: 'RWA-INFO' is mentioned on line 198, but not defined >> == Missing Reference: 'RFC 6205' is mentioned on line 779, but not >> defined >> >> I have just one question on this one: >> >>> - section 2.2. >>> Labels are variable in lengh and need not be 4 bytes long. This >>> needs to be represented and accounted for in the encodings defined >>> in this section. >>> >>> YOUNG>> Agreed. Added the following sentence in Section 2.6 (new section due to shuffling): >>> "Labels are variable in length. The second 32 bit field is a part of the base label used as a >>> starting point in many of the specific formats." >>> >> >> I don't understand what you mean by the "second 32 bit field" are you referring to the " Additional fields as necessary per action" field shown on page 14? >> >> Thanks, >> >> Lou >>
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