Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02
"Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Fri, 08 March 2019 08:51 UTC
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From: "Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com>
To: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>, Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02
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Hi Tom, A new version of the draft is available at IETF site, which address your below comments. Please kindly review. Per your question: augment "/nw:networks/nw:network/nw:network-types/" + "tet:te-topology" { container mw-topology { presence "indicates a topology type of microwave."; no YANG 'when' and it is a presence container so will all boxes with this YANG module have mw-topology for all te-topology? A box can present multiple TE topologies, including microwave topologies to its client. When a topology has a mw-topology presence container it indicates that it is a microwave topology. BR, Amy(on behalf of co-authors) ________________________________________ 发件人: CCAMP [ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 tom petch [ietfc@btconnect.com] 发送时间: 2019年1月23日 18:58 收件人: Daniele Ceccarelli; ccamp@ietf.org 抄送: ccamp-chairs@ietf.org 主题: Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02 Uh huh; a YANG module from the Routing Area so you know what happens next! Requirements Language lacks reference RFC8174 Copyright (c) 2018 (I know, the I-D is October 22, 2018:-) This document defines a YANG data model lacks a reference for YANG language RFC 3.1. The YANG Tree no reference for the YANG Tree diagram RFC YANG Module YANG 'file' lacks date YANG import statements lack references which then need adding to the I-D References and which then need a mention in the body of the I-D lest you get a warning for an unused reference reference "draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount: YANG Schema Mount"; wrong format - you need something like "RFC YYYY: YANG Schema Mount"; Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount ID-draft authors: hopefully this will move beyond the status of ID:-) no copyright statement list mw-link-availability{ key "availability"; leaf availability { type decimal64 { interesting choice of key type - I am unclear how this will be used - could do with a more expansiive description augment "/nw:networks/nw:network/nw:network-types/" + "tet:te-topology" { container mw-topology { presence "indicates a topology type of microwave."; no YANG 'when' and it is a presence container so will all boxes with this YANG module have mw-topology for all te-topology? IANA has assigned It is more common to say IANA is asked to assign and let them make the change when they have done what you ask 7.2. Informative References [I-D.ietf-netmod-schema-mount] [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo] since you are importing from these, I believe that they have to be Normative References. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com> To: <ccamp@ietf.org> Cc: <ccamp-chairs@ietf.org> Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 4:36 PM > Working group, > > > > We managed to complete at least one of the IPR polling procedures started. > > This starts a two weeks poll on making draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02 a > CCAMP working group document. > > Please send email to the list indicating "yes/support" or "no/do not > support" and a motivation for your reply, mandatory for the "not support" > and nice to have for the "support". > > > > The polling will end on Tuesday February 5th. > > > > Thanks, > > Daniele & Fatai > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -------- > _______________________________________________ > CCAMP mailing list > CCAMP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp > _______________________________________________ CCAMP mailing list CCAMP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp
- [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-top… Daniele Ceccarelli
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Aihuaguo (Aihua Guo, CRC)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Yemin (Amy)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Italo Busi
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Spreafico, Daniela (Nokia - IT/Vimercate)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Hejia (Jia)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Loa Andersson
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology Research Dept)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Daniele Ceccarelli
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Jonas Ahlberg
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Daniele Ceccarelli
- Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw… Yemin (Amy)