Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07.txt
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07.txt
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Another stray thought there are no reference statements for the imports which I think there should be e.g. import ietf-yang-types { reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types"; prefix "yang"; } import ietf-l1-service-types { reference "RFC XXXX - A Yang Data Model for L1 Connectivity Service Model (L1CSM)"; prefix "l1-st"; Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com> To: <ccamp@ietf.org> Sent: Tuesday, September 11, 2018 12:48 PM Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07.txt > Young > > Some more stray thoughts. > > Those pesky security people have just updated TLS so the reference for > that is now RFC8446 > > The netmod group did not update the details of the YANG Module Names > registry in RFC7950 so a better reference, in the IANA Considerations, > is RFC6020; elsewhere I think that RFC7950 is the better reference. > > You have 'Yang' in the Title, Introduction and in two of the reference > statements, all of which I think should be 'YANG' ('yang' is of course > correct in other places) > > Some of the lines of description in the YANG module are over 90 > characters, which is too long for an RFC. > > Tom Petch > > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org> > To: <i-d-announce@ietf.org> > Cc: <ccamp@ietf.org> > Sent: Thursday, August 30, 2018 7:22 PM > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane > WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : A Yang Data Model for L1 Connectivity > Service Model (L1CSM) > > Authors : G. Fioccola > > K. Lee > > Y. Lee > > D. Dhody > > D. Ceccarelli > > Filename : draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07.txt > > Pages : 25 > > Date : 2018-08-30 > > > > Abstract: > > This document provides a YANG data model for Layer 1 Connectivity > > Service Model (L1CSM). This YANG model is NMDA-compliant. > > > > > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang/ > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-07 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > I-D-Announce mailing list > > I-D-Announce@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt >
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- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… tom petch
- Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-ya… Leeyoung