Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt

Jie, Authors,
    I have a few comments:

- Section 3.1,
I think intermediate node behavior related to processing of the A is
unchanged by this document so think you should drop the 3 lines that
contain the phrase "... intermediate nodes ..."

- Section 3.2
The section is not clear if the A bit processing occurs / completes
before Loopback related processing begins or occurs coincidentally.  (I
read the last sentence of the first paragraph saying the former and the
last sentence of the 2nd paragraph saying the latter.)  Either way it
should be clarified.

Where is the Loopback (B) bit / Attribute Flag defined? This document,
right? Then the document, needs to state so in this section and in the
IANA section.

Section 4, needs to be updated to follow RFC2360, See
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-10
for a recent example.

- Also please cleanup your id-nits, see
http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt

Lou

On 10/20/2014 3:58 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote:
> Dear all, 
>
> The only change in this new version is: 
>
> - Update the references (one has become RFC)
>
> Your review and comments are highly appreciated.
>
> Many thanks,
> Jie
>
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>> Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt
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>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>  This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane
>> Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : GMPLS RSVP-TE Extensions for Lock Instruct and
>> Loopback
>>         Authors         : Jie Dong
>>                           Mach(Guoyi) Chen
>>                           Zhenqiang Li
>>                           Daniele Ceccarelli
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt
>> 	Pages           : 8
>> 	Date            : 2014-10-20
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document specifies extensions to Resource Reservation Protocol -
>>    Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) to support Lock Instruct (LI) and
>>    Loopback (LB) mechanisms for Label Switched Paths (LSPs).  These
>>    mechanisms are applicable to technologies which use Generalized
>>    Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) as control plane.
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb/
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