[CCAMP] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-08: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 28 November 2020 02:03 UTC

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[[ nits ]]

[ section 3 ]

* "min-slot-width-factor" and "max-slot-width-factor" could each have their
  description be simplified to refer only their own definition (as opposed
  to the shared duplicated text).

  Also, I'm not sure how to read "...of the slot width , granularity,".
  Should that just be "...of the slot width granularity,"?

* "this constraints is reported" could use a grammar fix. I'm guessing
  "this constraint is reported"?