[CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (5953)

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Subject: [CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (5953)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8632,
"A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5953

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Tetsuya Hasegawa <te.hasegawa2@gmail.com>

Section: 3.5.1.

Original Text
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   From a resource perspective, an alarm can, for example, have the
   following lifecycle: raise, change severity, change severity, clear,

Corrected Text
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   From a resource perspective, an alarm can, for example, have the
   following lifecycle: raise, change severity, clear,

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RFC8632 (draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-09)
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Title               : A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management
Publication Date    : September 2019
Author(s)           : S. Vallin, M. Bjorklund
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG