Re: [CCAMP] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14: (with COMMENT)

"Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Thu, 11 April 2019 15:13 UTC

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From: "Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com>
To: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Eric, 

Thanks for the comments, please see reply inline below.

BR,
Amy
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发件人: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker [noreply@ietf.org]
发送时间: 2019年4月8日 16:51
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抄送: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability@ietf.org; Daniele Ceccarelli; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com; ccamp@ietf.org
主题: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14: No Objection

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COMMENTS
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C1) Section 3.1 "Availability TLV" is a little too generic IMHO, should rather
be named "Bandwidth availability TLV"
[Amy]  I'm ok to to renamed it.  

C2) Section 3.1, the availability encoding by a float is possibly not the
optimum one esp with 3 bytes 'reserved'. I would have expected something
(perhaps too simple ?) such as one byte where 'n' means availability of 1-10**n
(for example, 3 means 1-10**-3 == 0.999). But, this is a detail.
[Amy] Since the OSPF extension RFC8330 use the floating-point number, here we would like to continue using it. 

NITS
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N1) Section 3.1, s/MUST be less than 1and/MUST be less than 1 and/
[Amy] will fix the nits.