Re: [CCAMP] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt wson

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Thu, 21 May 2020 08:32 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>, "ccamp-chairs@ietf.org" <ccamp-chairs@ietf.org>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt wson
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From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
Sent: 19 May 2020 07:59

Hi, WG & Chairs,

As a follow up of the virtual interim, the authors cleaned up the module & draft by updating the document. Now we believe the draft is ready to progress, please let us know the plan & advices.

<tp>

I had a look at this I=D but doubt if I will ever review it properly.  Like other te-topo based modules, it is big, it is complex and the ground underneath it keeps performing somersaults..

Still, I did notice the following

e.g. whenever I see this in a technical specification, I know what it means but wonder if the author has the same idea.  is-reconfigurable-node true e.g. ROADM tells me that there are lots of possible reconfigurable node types such  as ... or ... or  .... but here I will give just one example to whit ROADM.  I wonder if that is what the author intends.

s.1 /impairement/impairment/

optical-impairment-topology-yang is a Normative Reference which means that this I-D cannot proceed until it does.  Since this is described as out of scope, I would have thought that Informative would be enough.

module description 'two encoding documents RFC7579'
perhaps RFC7581 as well

References
yang-te-topo-22 is now up to -23 and with 115 pages and no change log, who knows what is lurking there?

And I still wonder why layer0-types has a reference to this I-D:-)

I note that the e-mail address in the YANG module is not the same as in Authors for Aihua Guo

Tom Petch


BTW, the ietf-layer0-types was updated as well, and can be found at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-06. It is suggested to cluster the two works together to proceed.

Thank you.

Best wishes,
Haomian(on behalf of all authors & contributors)

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收件人: Daniel King <d.king@lancaster.ac.uk>uk>; Aihua Guo <aihuaguo@futurewei.com>om>; Victor Lopezalvarez <victor.lopezalvarez@telefonica.com>om>; Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>om>; Victor Lopez <victor.lopezalvarez@telefonica.com>om>; Young Lee <younglee.tx@gmail.com>
主题: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt


A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt has been successfully submitted by Haomian Zheng and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:           draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang
Revision:       25
Title:          A YANG Data Model for WSON (Wavelength Switched Optical Networks)
Document date:  2020-05-19
Group:          ccamp
Pages:          60
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang/
Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang
Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-yang-25

Abstract:
   This document provides a YANG data model for the routing and
   wavelength assignment (RWA) TE topology in wavelength switched
   optical networks (WSONs).  The YANG data model defined in this
   document conforms to the Network Management Datastore Architecture
   (NMDA).




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