Re: [CCAMP] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05.txt

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

Sorry I replied to the wrong message; the comments I made yesterday were
on otn-topo, namely

-  the YANG module file statement needs a date on it e.g. as in
draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-yang

- I see G.709 referenced in the YANG module but do not see a reference
that matches this in the I-D References

- I see
I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te
in the YANG module but not in the I-D References

- there is a line length limit in RFC which is exceeded in many places
in the YANG module by lines such as
/* Augment egress label restrictions end of connectivity-matrix
information-source */

- IANA Considerations should reference RFC6020 not RFC7950 since RFC7950
does no more than say 'see RFC6020' (something I only just learnt)

Tom Petch

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From: "Zhenghaomian (Zhenghaomian, Optical &Microwave Technology
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Tom Petch

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Subject: [CCAMP] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05.txt


> Dear WG,
>
> We update this draft to fix some of previous 'warnings' in the YANG
module. Some YANG reference description is also added.
>
> Thank you.
>
> Best wishes,
> Haomian
>
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: CCAMP [mailto:[e-mail]] 代表
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> 发送时间: 2018年8月23日 15:36
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> 主题: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane
WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Optical Transport
Network Topology
>         Authors         : Haomian Zheng
>                           Aihua Guo
>                           Italo Busi
>                           Anurag Sharma
>                           Xufeng Liu
>                           Sergio Belotti
>                           Yunbin Xu
>                           Lei Wang
>                           Oscar Gonzalez de Dios
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05.txt
> Pages           : 59
> Date            : 2018-08-23
>
> Abstract:
>    A transport network is a server-layer network designed to provide
>    connectivity services for a client-layer network to carry the
client
>    traffic transparently across the server-layer network resources.  A
>    transport network can be constructed from equipments utilizing any
of
>    a number of different transport technologies such as the evolving
>    Optical Transport Networks (OTN) or packet transport as provided by
>    the MPLS-Transport Profile (MPLS-TP).
>
>    This document describes a YANG data model to describe the
topologies
>    of an Optical Transport Network (OTN).  It is independent of
control
>    plane protocols and captures topological and resource related
>    information pertaining to OTN.  This model enables clients, which
>    interact with a transport domain controller via a REST interface,
for
>    OTN topology related operations such as obtaining the relevant
>    topology resource information.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-05
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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