[CCAMP] Opinions please FW: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7139 (3930)

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Sun, 23 March 2014 22:10 UTC

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Subject: [CCAMP] Opinions please FW: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7139 (3930)
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Hi,

Before I get into the habit of raising and verifying errata reports myself,
could some of you look at this and check that I am right.

Thanks,
Adrian

> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org]
> Sent: 23 March 2014 22:04
> To: zhangfatai@huawei.com; zhangguoying@mail.ritt.com.cn;
> sergio.belotti@alcatel-lucent.it; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com;
> kpithewan@infinera.com; akatlas@gmail.com; adrian@olddog.co.uk;
> lberger@labn.net; dbrungard@att.com
> Cc: adrian@olddog.co.uk; ccamp@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7139 (3930)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7139,
> "GMPLS Signaling Extensions for Control of Evolving G.709 Optical Transport
> Networks".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7139&eid=3930
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
> 
> Section: 3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    [RFC4328] describes GMPLS signaling extensions to support the control
>    for the 2001 revision of the G.709 specification.  However, [RFC7096]
>    does not provide the means to signal all the new Signal Types and
>    related mapping and multiplexing functionalities.  Moreover, it
>    supports only the deprecated auto-MSI (Multiframe Structure
>    Identifier) mode, which assumes that the Tributary Port Number (TPN)
>    is automatically assigned in the transmit direction and not checked
>    in the receive direction.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    [RFC4328] describes GMPLS signaling extensions to support the control
>    for the 2001 revision of the G.709 specification.  However, as
>    described in[RFC7096], that document does not provide the means to
>    signal all the new Signal Types and related mapping and multiplexing
>    functionalities.  Moreover, it supports only the deprecated auto-MSI
>    (Multiframe Structure Identifier) mode, which assumes that the
>    Tributary Port Number (TPN) is automatically assigned in the transmit
>    direction and not checked in the receive direction.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> RFC 7096 is the analysis of pre-existing GMPLS signalling. It does not contain
any
> protocol extensions itself, but looks at the mechanisms provided in RFC 4328.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7139 (draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-12)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : GMPLS Signaling Extensions for Control of Evolving G.709
Optical
> Transport Networks
> Publication Date    : March 2014
> Author(s)           : F. Zhang, Ed., G. Zhang, S. Belotti, D. Ceccarelli, K.
Pithewan
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG