Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02

[Daniele Ceccarelli <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thanks a lot for your thorough review. I would consider your comments
blocking for a WG last call but not for a WG adoption...where the WG is
supposed to start working on the document.  Would you agree?

Thanks,
Daniele  

-----Original Message-----
From: tom petch <[e-mail]> 
Sent: den 23 januari 2019 11:58
To: Daniele Ceccarelli <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
Cc: [e-mail]
Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG adoption poll on draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02

Uh huh; a YANG module from the Routing Area so you know what happens next!

Requirements Language lacks reference RFC8174

Copyright (c) 2018 (I know, the I-D is October 22, 2018:-)

This document defines a YANG data model
lacks a reference for YANG language RFC

3.1.  The YANG Tree
no reference for the YANG Tree diagram RFC

YANG Module

YANG 'file' lacks date

YANG import statements lack references which then need adding to the I-D
References and which then need a mention in the body of the I-D lest you get
a warning for an unused reference

reference "draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount: YANG Schema Mount"; wrong format
- you need something like
         "RFC YYYY: YANG Schema Mount";
Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to
draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount

    ID-draft authors:
hopefully this will move beyond the status of ID:-)

no copyright statement

            list mw-link-availability{
              key "availability";
              leaf availability {
                type decimal64 {

interesting choice of key type - I am unclear how this will be used - could
do with a more expansiive description

     augment "/nw:networks/nw:network/nw:network-types/"
          + "tet:te-topology" {
      container mw-topology {
        presence "indicates a topology type of microwave."; no YANG 'when'
and it is a presence container so will all boxes with this YANG module have
mw-topology for all te-topology?

IANA has assigned
It is more common to say
IANA is asked to assign
and let them make the change when they have done what you ask

7.2.  Informative References

   [I-D.ietf-netmod-schema-mount]
   [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo]

since you are importing from these, I believe that they have to be Normative
References.

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Daniele Ceccarelli" <[e-mail]>
To: <[e-mail]>
Cc: <[e-mail]>
Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 4:36 PM

> Working group,
>
>
>
> We managed to complete at least one of the IPR polling procedures
started.
>
> This starts a two weeks poll on making  draft-ye-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-02
a
> CCAMP working group document.
>
> Please send email to the list indicating "yes/support" or "no/do not 
> support" and a motivation for  your reply, mandatory for the "not
support"
> and nice to have for the "support".
>
>
>
> The polling will end on Tuesday February 5th.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Daniele & Fatai
>
>
>
>


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